TheWanderingBard
I love reading books and vibing to Lo-fi. In my spare time I like to make riddles and chillax. I'm 16 and I'm an new author! :D
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He's not useless 💀. His sister is right there. They're outside. Why go read a book when his sister is literally an expert when it comes to these beasts?
The mc has one love interest. Their relationship will gradually build up
Hello, it's TheWanderingBard here! I've 11 chapters stockpiled and will be releasing 1 chap per day(so the updates should be fairly consistent). I hope you all enjoy the read! I'm a new author so if you've spotted any mistakes in my chapters please point them out. I also welcome any feedback/suggestions with open arms. Have a great timeee!
Thanks for the review! I'll continue to put out quality work!
World background and stability of updates is quite good. Although I would suggest working on the grammar and capitlisation more so that the paragraphs are easy on the eyes and readers won't get disenchanted when reading your novel. I see good potential in here. Maybe you should use grammarly or prowritingaid to help make your writing even better! Good luck author
Very interesting premise. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters and seeing how far this novel will go. There are very few grammar mistakes with awkward phrasing here and there but that doesn't affect the story too drastically. Paragraphs are easy on the eyes which make this a very fun and relaxing read. Keep up the good work!