Very interesting premise. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters and seeing how far this novel will go. There are very few grammar mistakes with awkward phrasing here and there but that doesn't affect the story too drastically. Paragraphs are easy on the eyes which make this a very fun and relaxing read. Keep up the good work!
RighteousFilth
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