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I read it only till 25 chapters. I have been reading novel, manhwa for years now. And if a story seems cliche even after 20 chapters, I don’t continue. I know most Chinese novels repeat same story for 1000s of chapters, and I cannot wait for hundreds of chapters now. Still I understand that on webnovel, stories with large amount of chapters are preferred. I am just not the perfect recipient for them
Currently at ch 125, and my opinion is quite mixed. Most of the novel is average, but the part from ch 108, where mc falls for hopelessness, that part is the best. But many illogical parts are also there, which I wish weren’t there. Example - 1) how the father of mc had to sacrifice himself. Couldn’t he had made the top people in elf council slave, before his sacrifice? 2) the enrollment in royal academy, had such a stupid custom of sacrificing talents to the beasts… like really? And mc had to get involved there just to show a fight?
I too dropped the story after 20 chapters, when he romances his own mother, and plans to marry half sister. there is some background about conflicts between two families, and honestly the conflict seems hard to understand, and grammar quality drops in those chapters. I dropped after it. After reading your review that even after ch 52, he is running after more girls, i made right decision by dropping the novel
The story is still alright in beginning, but as we move past 300 chapters, many plot holes begin to emerge. There is a central mystery that mc noel's family is executed, and FMC Anna had a big role in it. Anna reincarnates then, with future memories. so she tries to co-operate with Noel, whose family was killed because of her. Anna apologies quite a lot, and some secrets are revealed, after which both begins to trust one another. story was still alright till then, and it took 150 chapters to reach here. but after that author has to expand the world somehow, and his logic fails many times. The problem is, author tries to portray mc as quite clever, but honestly the plans of mc and FMC are idiotic, still they get saved every time bcz of plot. there is a villain organisation whose goal is to help demons, and we never understand why so many stupid people are there who whole heartedly join organization. At 600+ chapter, we get to know that this villain organisation targets mc's country only for some reason, and royals support the villain organisation to crush their opponents. honestly mc should leave the nation at that point only, as in other nations he would be valued and there will be no villain oerganisation. Basically, as chapter count increase, plot holes increase
Dropped at ch 70. This novel is too slow, like the Chinese manhwa. The novel starts with the mc with a very mysterious past, and the hope of knowing about his past is what made me read till ch 70. but there is not even slightest progression on the mystery. Story progression is also very slow and there is no interesting character or plot point.
The overall thought of author is good. This story shows how a powerful cultivator builds his own army, how he gets noobs to trust him and how people can be stupid to defy power in desperate times. The overall story and plans are good. what's really bad is his writing style. author seems like a 12 year old with all the language he used. and the story within 300 chapters could have been easily done in 75 chapters, if he removed the unnecessary conversations. I wish you would re edit this story making it much more concise, as this story has lots of potential.
Another average story, with an overly edgy mc. Mc has tons of knowledge in his head, because of some random reason like dreams, still the only way he has to grow is by demonic methods. Wow, what a way to make mc edgy. And even if he is super weak, and he decides to remain low, still he goes around fighting everyone and making enemies everywhere.. What a smart mc really... It's a really average piece of work.
Another average story, where there is no use of reincarnation. The author gives a cliffhanger in beginning, showing the world is destroyed but mc has become super powerful, and then the story of mc starts. mc has cheat powers, and works hard. that's all. there is no interesting character. Nothing memorable