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kartik_agarwal
kartik_agarwalLv31mthkartik_agarwal

The story is still alright in beginning, but as we move past 300 chapters, many plot holes begin to emerge. There is a central mystery that mc noel's family is executed, and FMC Anna had a big role in it. Anna reincarnates then, with future memories. so she tries to co-operate with Noel, whose family was killed because of her. Anna apologies quite a lot, and some secrets are revealed, after which both begins to trust one another. story was still alright till then, and it took 150 chapters to reach here. but after that author has to expand the world somehow, and his logic fails many times. The problem is, author tries to portray mc as quite clever, but honestly the plans of mc and FMC are idiotic, still they get saved every time bcz of plot. there is a villain organisation whose goal is to help demons, and we never understand why so many stupid people are there who whole heartedly join organization. At 600+ chapter, we get to know that this villain organisation targets mc's country only for some reason, and royals support the villain organisation to crush their opponents. honestly mc should leave the nation at that point only, as in other nations he would be valued and there will be no villain oerganisation. Basically, as chapter count increase, plot holes increase

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VaporaFire
VaporaFireLv3VaporaFire

thanks 👍👍👍 i wont continue reading this lols, im just few chs in and mc feels simp and the girl is irritating, i think its best if mc soul also reincarnated and kills the girl instantly when they first met and the title is just for bamboozle. Then mc will become villain and get revenge.

kartik_agarwal
kartik_agarwalLv3kartik_agarwal

The story is actually alright. If you find starting chapters enjoyable, do read it