Review Detail of kartik_agarwal in Playboy Cultivator in the Apocalypse

The overall thought of author is good. This story shows how a powerful cultivator builds his own army, how he gets noobs to trust him and how people can be stupid to defy power in desperate times. The overall story and plans are good. what's really bad is his writing style. author seems like a 12 year old with all the language he used. and the story within 300 chapters could have been easily done in 75 chapters, if he removed the unnecessary conversations. I wish you would re edit this story making it much more concise, as this story has lots of potential.