SilentMan
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SilentMan6mthCommentedHela is confirmed to be Evernight's Smurf. I didn't know Mommy was a heavy drinker tho... 🥺
Dreamscape… Franca glanced at Hela and felt that this didn't match her impression of her Sequence pathway.- SilentMan6mthCommented
Could it be a secret transmission to Outer Gods. Maybe CW wants to make a pact with COI(or already has), and ask(ed) for COI's help to win against Klein. Of course, in return he might've promised COI his corresponding Sefirot. This might be the reason why the book is named 'COI', because COI might be the first Outer God to descend, with the help of CW, who has Authority over all "Doors"!
"Why does He want this done… Aurore is only a Sequence 7. She's just a nobody…" Lumian lowered his head and muttered in pain. - SilentMan8mthCommented
Jenna could become a believer of Fool. Good. Good. Good.
The terms didn't demand Jenna's faith to be constantly with the Eternal Blazing Sun, but they required her not to believe in an evil god. - SilentMan8mthCommented
Dont worry, Abomination Suah has the most Ls in the entire LOTM universe. So, even if he descends, he won't be able to bite you.
Of course, if they have an Angel's protection and can get Him to temporarily descend upon Salle de Bal Brise, they can do whatever they want… - SilentMan1yrPosted
I liked the story and concept and that is why I'm giving 5 stars(I'm also a fan of Lotm). But the first chapter was so off putting and unnecessary. Even without it, everything would've been fine, No, much better. The reason? 1)First of all, what is the point of building up a story to a point where people already know the ending? It spoils everything especially when you are experimenting in the Lovecraftian genre. Lovers of this genre like mysteries, foreshadowing, etc... not just straight up-Look Mc's gonna become an OP god and crush these people of this region. You get the gist right? 2)The first chap gave me a polished chinese cultivation trash vibes. Gods not acting like Gods but instead shout like children... How can these people be like: "Oh my gawd, How did he do that?" "What? So powerful? "Kyaaa!!!!" Yeah... If MC can be powerful and OP then so should the characters at a similar level be but they feel too weak. Most of my complaints are regarding the first chapter, apart from that I feel everything is great. Just remove the first chap if possible, after all, I don't think it provides anything to the story except spoilers lmao. Love you for writing this :)
- SilentMan1yrCommented"Can I hold your hands?" Aria suddenly asked.
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Wait. Sister's out as well?
And that same ungrateful parent kicked me and my sister out. - SilentMan1yrCommented
So something similar to Dual Cultivation? Su Yang also had zero morals after being reborn, even though his memories weren't unlocked... He f*cked on just instincts ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
...and because I may have had a taboo relationship with one of my stepmothers. - SilentMan1yrReplied to Arid_Landscape
Ahh man of culture~ Pagma's Sword Dance- [KILL]!
[Ding. A new skill 'Sword Dance' has been created due to your actions] - SilentMan1yrReplied to Universal_Monarch
Reverend Insanity. Dude are you living under a rock?
Ning Fan stubbornly retorted. He hated evil, he wanted to become an Immortal instead to punish evil! - SilentMan1yrCommented
*Proceeds to shed a few tears* *Sniff* *Sniff* "Masterpiece."
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Yes Hard! Very Hard... Why is my mind always inside the gutter?
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"Good-looking people underestimate themselves; Ugly people think they are attractive!"
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- SilentMan1yrReplied to ThalesChief
I can't believe there is no "Jade-Skin" and "Eyes like Water". So disappointing...😂
As she turned, Shi Yan finally saw her delicate appearance. She looked around 20 years old with five and a half feet in height. Her face was glowing like a bright moon and she had a slim waist, well-developed chest, and nice posture. She was wearing an exquisite lavender robe and soft silver armor which couldn't cover her fascinating figure as a legendary wild vixen. - SilentMan2yrCommented
Holding hands is too lewd. >_<
She didn't care about the man's money, looks, or power, just that he liked her for her and showed her the love and gentleness she deserves, even though she had shown an annoying side when Austin patted her lovingly, in her heart she liked it, for her the act of kissing, holding hands were all a very loving act - SilentMan2yrReplied to 0THeunkown0
Axiom doesn't have any missing pair of organs. He is a healthy adult man(only physically, mentally he is broken) but infertile due to other complications...which might be related to his past. Since the era I am writing about is technologically advanced with magic there might some fixes... We'll see about that. That is all I can say for now. :)
Ch 12 I Am Not Delusional. (R-18) - SilentMan2yrReplied to God_of_War_GamesCh 10 I Trade Emotions.
- SilentMan2yrReplied to death_frost2345Ch 11 Loss of Individuality.