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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    hmm. this chapter tells us how dependednt Klyde and Celestine is. I wonder how Torii will react

    Ch 15 Chapter 14: We are sorry!
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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    I take that back gahahahahha

    I can't deny that I'm having fun though.
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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    how cold, Torii

    "T-thank you very much!" She took the roses from me very politely, and when she admired the roses from her hands with pure innocence and beauty, it made me smile. Though, it was easily shrugged off, and my face went back to normal, fierce, strict, and serious.
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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    I love Torii's strictness~!

    "Don't make a ruckus and sit down. Celestine, you've come at good timing. I was just explaining my plan." Torii explained as he welcomed Celestine.
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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    CONGRATULATION'S ON YOUR FEAT AUTHOR! WE LOVE YOU!!

    Ch 11 Happy 1st Monthsary, Land of the Dawn!
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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Replied to cleme_vern_tine

    I really wish not. i love his loyalty

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: Your hands need not be dirtied, Milord
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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    woah the comments are lively af. thanks for the chap!

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: I'm...
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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    what a speech...

    "Well, since this world is already messed up, how about building a new world right? The former world was already crushed anyway, why bother rebuilding it the same way? There are countless things that destroyed the world, so the best thing to do is to let the monsters first destroy it and eradicate the monsters. Then, I'll gather everyone who had survived, and since they survived, they are either strong or witty. I need that strength and intelligence to renovate the whole world. Tell me Torii, are you interested?" Asked Klyde, reaching his right hand towards Torii while smiling.
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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    I WANT TO SEE MORE OF HIS FLAIRS DOE

    "Serves who right?" Torii said, which made all three of them be shocked. As the smoke disappeared, Torii was different. Torii was fully covered in wood. When he knew that the explosion was done, the wood that was covering him disappeared.
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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    chillllllllll the author just mistyped Torii as Xane. but who is Xane though?

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Flairs
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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    looooool maybe its Torii the author just mistyped it

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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    niceeee

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: New World
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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    ohoho

    Other monsters were alone, some were with their races, and some were with other types of monsters. Since the hole was enormous, it didn't take long to find their food. In fact, since there were nearby houses, they took down all nearby houses in only a few seconds. Some humans tried to run away, some hid, but there was one thing for sure. The world is no longer the world humans knew.
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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Commented

    this is just a hunch. maybe the dragons are like the key to like free the world from the chaos. i mean, its dragons. duh?

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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Replied to Stein_Grim

    also, ive given 5 stars for effort and the plot of the story. not bad author

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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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  • Stein_Grim
    Stein_Grim2yr
    Posted

    okay. this is the first time ive ever liked some fantasy novel. the writing speed is quite slow, and the writing technique is definitely that of a pro, but overall I'm satisfied. everything can be fixed, and the author definitely have potential. that's all

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    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
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