webnovel
avatar
0
Brianna_Negbal

Brianna_Negbal

Lv1
2021-06-08 JoinedGlobal
-h

of reading

2

Read books

Moments

18
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Commented

    i ship them, but Tolden forever!

    Ch 14 Chapter 13: Amelie Geneviève
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Commented

    LOVE THIS!!!

    Ch 12 Chapter 11: Preparations
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Commented

    CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR PATH, AUTHOR! WE HOPE TO SEE MORE! WE LOVE YOU AND YOUR NOVEL!!

    Ch 11 Happy 1st Monthsary, Land of the Dawn!
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Replied to cleme_vern_tine

    idc, i ship them

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: Your hands need not be dirtied, Milord
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Commented

    I really love this paragraph. this shows how shallow minds people are. we should grow what is inside us whilst helping others, not judging every single mistake they make. good job author

    "Then what is the point of being disgusted to you? Your parents are the ones who did the wrong thing, and not you." Yalden sighed. "Master, you didn't do anything wrong. I don't get why everyone is hating you yourself when your parents are the ones who made the mistake. If I were given the chance to say something, I'll fight for the kid, since the parents left all the accountabilities, debt, and pain to that kid. Master Torii, you are a strong person, and I'm telling you that because you have managed to keep your sanity amidst all of the situations you are in. People's minds are too shallow, but you've managed to keep yourself together."
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Commented

    ANOTHER SHIP ON THE HORIZON BABY

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: I'm...
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Commented

    Torii, I cant with your attitude HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    "What a foolish thing to do. I for a fact know that you suck at acting. And by suck I mean, SUCK. S. U. C. K." Torii rolled his eyes. Klyde looked at him with an awkward smile, and then grinned evilly.
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Replied to Brianna_Negbal

    .................................................................................................................................................

    "I'm such a diva right now. I know this sounds really cringy, but I'm sorry. I'm really, really sorry. I truly regret that I said those words to you and left you all alone when you are at your worst when I should be the one who's giving you love and caring. With all I've done, I would be shameless if I show my face to you. I don't think that I can ever see you again. Goodbye. I'm sorry." He said, turning his back as he walked away.
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Commented

    awwwwww

    "Torii, I know that I have betrayed you, and I really understand if you would never forgive me. But if you do forgive me, would you still be beside me, like you ever did? Would you still listen to all my problems? Would you still help me with my homework and projects? Would you still be the soft type that you only show when we are together?" The man said.
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Commented

    sMuT

    "I'm such a diva right now. I know this sounds really cringy, but I'm sorry. I'm really, really sorry. I truly regret that I said those words to you and left you all alone when you are at your worst when I should be the one who's giving you love and caring. With all I've done, I would be shameless if I show my face to you. I don't think that I can ever see you again. Goodbye. I'm sorry." He said, turning his back as he walked away.
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Commented

    NICE NICE NICE

    "Killing yourself will only make matters worse, Klyde." A mysterious voice said, which made the man named Klyde stop.
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Commented

    -Torii 2021

    "So we'll be here looking at each other for like a day?" Torii said, which made Klyde let out a little giggle. Klyde sighed, and then looked at Torii.
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Commented

    weakling eh?

    "Get ready to be crippled, weakling." Both the boy and the girl said. The girl lifted he arms and clenched her fist, and soon lt out a punch. Literally a millisecond later and the fist of the girl was already a hundred micrometers near Klyde's face.
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Replied to Brianna_Negbal

    im just reading it rn but i wanted to see if there were comments already

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Look Who's Talking
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Commented

    YALL IM LATE

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Look Who's Talking
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Replied to ILOVEFANTASY

    BRUH

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Look Who's Talking
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Replied to Brianna_Negbal

    hot too

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: New World
    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail
  • Brianna_Negbal
    Brianna_Negbal2yr
    Posted

    hmmm... what should i say. the writing speed and techniques are not bad. the story itself is quite good, however, you need to work more on your writing speed. i know you can do it author. great story!

    altalt
    Land Of The Dawn
    Fantasy · suh_tangerine
    detail