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Kara_Croft10hCommentedLoving the story!! But I’m having hard time reading some of the paragraphs. Reason for that, it’s either hard to understand what is being convey and some of the sentences are repetitive with just different wordings. I hope you guys can use Grammarly app or maybe ChatGPT.
Ch 57 Waste Of His Popularity- Kara_Croft12hCommented
Thanks for the long chapter it was enjoyable😍 Maya is great! I loved her personality which hopefully Diane can learn a thing or two from her. Christian sounds like he’s going through his mid-life crisis😂 Man just gotta admit that he’s still in love with her and start their relationship over.
Ch 53 Shameless Ex-Husband - Kara_Croft12hCommentedCh 37 Chapter 37: The right time
- Kara_Croft1dCommented"You didn't come back for your cousin's wedding, we missed you," Elisha said as she looked over at Caleb, trying desperately to grab his attention. Her voice was an octave higher than usual as she batted her eyelashes at him, her high-pitched voice grating to her ears. The side of her body was now pressed against Caleb, leaving practically zero gap between them.
- Kara_Croft1dCommentedCh 34 Chapter 34: The Aftermath
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She should disown her family. They are vile and not worth her time and attention much less, affection.
She knew she had held out too high hopes and expectations. In fact, it was silly of her to even bother thinking that her parents would feel even an ounce of worry or at least come out to check on her. A look of sadness crossed her face, despite how hard she tried to not let it show, she failed. - Kara_Croft1dCommentedCh 52 A Wild Friend; Maya
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Thank you for the Mass release, Paschalinelily❤️ Christian surely need to make up his mind and talk to Diane. Maybe they can start all over again as two people who just met each other rather than playing a teenage-lovers-quarrel game. I do love that he is a man of his own words and he is not letting anyone manipulate his own fate.
Ch 52 A Wild Friend; Maya - Kara_Croft3dCommented
**Phillip I noticed there are plenty of times you have mistaken the names of the characters, dear author. You might want to keep an eye on that.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Kara_Croft4dCommented
Darn it!! Seems like she’s bringing more heartache and headache to herself with the choice she made😩
There was more to it, but she took that secret with her out of his penthouse. - Kara_Croft5dCommentedCh 29 29| Welcome To The Pack
- Kara_Croft5dCommentedCh 19 Gold Digger
- Kara_Croft5dCommentedCh 8 Suspicious Cousin
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LOVE IT❤️ I’m so glad she told him what was important but I do wonder what else she isn’t telling him that she thinks he must know already. I guess that is for another chapter for it to be revealed. Hopefully they can find a way to bring her powers and immortality back. Zak will be devastated having to loose her.
Ch 28 28| Baring My Soul - Kara_Croft6dCommented
Oof…busted, Ash!
"Good. Now that we can have a private conversation by ourselves, won't you tell me what you are doing in my territory, exiled Alpha Heir of the Southern Lands?"