Well, I don't know what to write, the overall storyline feels a bit strange, like everything is going too smoothly, well... However, I quite liked this novel, so don't drop it, because the story made me interested(I'm in a situation where I'm running out of novels that I can read)

is this a translated novel? If it is true that this is a translated novel, please provide information about the original title

Is this worth reading? Well I guess it would be feasible since the idea is to use a red scarab like a blue beetle However, I don't recommend it because the writing is messy, I would recommend it if the writer learned the basics of how to write a story. How to use punctuation and more

The writing is chaotic, there is no distinction between narrative and dialogue between characters, even the author's notes are not marked to separate the contents of the novel, really messy and made me lazy to read because it made me confused when reading between narrative and dialogue, sorry if the other ratings are low but that's what I can conclude when reading the first few lines of the chapter due to the chaotic writing

Hope you guys like it, because I'm a beginner writer and still not very good at writing novels, so please advise and criticize................................................................

this is a good story, i like it and in the beginning i was interested in this story, i hope the update of this story is stable. And I also feel that it's better to omit the quotations at the beginning of the chapter

I hope you don't drop this fanfic

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what about the ability to make mana solidify so that it can become an object that does physical attacks

I just found out this chapter has been updated 3 months ago, I hope this continues

I've seen a lot of fanfic where their MC is something like Sung-Jin Woo, and I'd prefer it if it was something different, like having the power to manipulate high level fire or use illusions that can deceive the senses of sentient beings

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter, Even though I'm quite saddened by the news that this story is being discontinued, well at least the ending is told

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter