Review Detail of Atalyn_Navia in Living with the scarab in the natsu verse

Item: Living with the scarab in the natsu verse
Rating: 2.4

Review detail

Atalyn_NaviaLv23mthAtalyn_Navia

The writing is chaotic, there is no distinction between narrative and dialogue between characters, even the author's notes are not marked to separate the contents of the novel, really messy and made me lazy to read because it made me confused when reading between narrative and dialogue, sorry if the other ratings are low but that's what I can conclude when reading the first few lines of the chapter due to the chaotic writing

Living with the scarab in the natsu verse

Tahmina_Begum_9138

Liked it!

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Atalyn_NaviaLv2Atalyn_Navia

Is this worth reading? Well I guess it would be feasible since the idea is to use a red scarab like a blue beetle However, I don't recommend it because the writing is messy, I would recommend it if the writer learned the basics of how to write a story. How to use punctuation and more

3mth

Tahmina_Begum_9138AuthorTahmina_Begum_9138

well this is the last message that broke the camels back i guess i will using chat gpt to fix everything thanks for that iIkinda need that reality switch

3mth