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Amit_Kumar_061911mthCommentedIf Xiao Ming is asked how he came to this world, all he can say is that "truck-kun" chose him because of his good performance.- Amit_Kumar_061911mthCommented"Hehehe, I know, Young Master Xiao Yan has such a strong talent, I can't even wait to please him."
- Amit_Kumar_061911mthCommented"Hahahaha, I said before that Young Master Xiao Yan was incredibly handsome and would definitely show his talent in the future! See, I was right."
- Amit_Kumar_061911mthCommented"Dou Disciple, One Star!"
- Amit_Kumar_061911mthPosted
Read through all the available chapters, and one thing i would say is...Give me more!!!!!! the writing quality is suuuperr! story is also interesting, not some cliche story where mc is luffy sidekick(at least not till now), because this one has an actually good backstory!! 9/10.The language is a little advanced, like he uses super high level words very ofter but still good!!
- Amit_Kumar_061911mthCommentedCh 6 Chapter 6
- Amit_Kumar_061911mthCommentedIn the midst of Sengoku's engrossment, the office door swung open with a resounding bang, and Garp barged in without a hint of decorum. Rice crackers in hand, he munched away with gusto, crumbs scattering in all directions. Sengoku had grown accustomed to Garp's spontaneous entries, finding amusement in his predictable unpredictability.
- Amit_Kumar_061911mthCommentedCh 4 Chapter 4
- Amit_Kumar_061911mthCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3
- Amit_Kumar_061911mthCommentedA tattoo of a burning skull, encircled by crackling lightning, adorned his chest, symbolizing his connection to the tribe's dark and powerful beliefs.
- Amit_Kumar_061911mthReplied to BattleKing10000Ch 1 Chapter 1
- Amit_Kumar_061911mthCommented"The One Piece!"
- Amit_Kumar_061911mthCommented[Kaienreki Calender, Year 1500]
- Amit_Kumar_06191yrPosted
very interesting concept. i have never seen anyone write a fix with muscular or his quirk so i look forward to it, also please keep the ramance to a minimum, as more girls ruin the story. harem is ok if done right or else it just makes a senseless story. my suggestion is 2-3 is fine. The story is interesting and new, grammar is also better than most of the writers on this platform, there are minor mistakes here and there but not much. The upload speed is however terrible. months of break for 1 chapter.
- Amit_Kumar_06191yrCommented
The chad hero: Gigachad
Please think of a hero name for Neji!!! - Amit_Kumar_06191yrCommented
best girl fr (all are best)
There emerged a tall girl with oynx colored hair done in a high ponytail, she had a jacket daped over her shoulders with the zipper open, a black sports bra inside. - Amit_Kumar_06191yrCommented"I guess its time to grind"
- Amit_Kumar_06191yrCommented'Mt. Lady huh?'
- Amit_Kumar_06191yrCommentedCh 10 chapter 10