Hi! Now that I'm caught up, I just wanna say a few things. The overall story is good, however, there are a lot of issues in writing quality. Sometimes I can see that you lacked some punctuations in each paragraph. Overall the novel is good, and needs a little bit of fixing. Hopefully you like my review. Cheers!
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