Review Detail of TruthHurtsX1000 in Black Rinnegan In The Rain Village

It's like author never read a fanfic before. So sister just random disappears the he sleeps and goes to Naruto verse. Sister stabbed in middle town by assassin right when he opens eyes. Yeah right. Village rain ain't bloody mist. Whole foundation is stupid and cliche. Now garbage chapter 3 just pushes it to not even worth trying. Plus no memories in 12 or so old body lmao dumbest shyt ever