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So this MC is a beta. You’re just letting everyone walk on you. I mean, what is he thinking? This is the rule of the jungle. If he’s weak, then he has no right to live. This story is still funny in the beginning but now it just gets old.
It’s decent but I’d prefer if Harry Potter here is a reincarnator with a cunning and cold personality. I mean, he’s been to many worlds but he isn’t that strong. If I’d been to that many world I would’ve sucked those worlds dry. I will take any powers that will be useful to me. He always prioritizes making friends and whatnot and helping other people. That’s not bad, per se. But I would’ve prioritize myself or my loved ones first. He should’ve been the God of the Omniverse by now. Some worlds are easier to get stronger. Like Tensura, he should super OP by now.
Why did he almost lost to Ash? No experience? He’s been with his Pokemon for almost 10 years. He can get battling experience anywhere. That just means he has no talent in battling. I guess he will be disappointment if this is his performance. And he’s also a follower of Ash.
And here we go again. He let his enemies escape alive again. What a beta MC. He’s always so indecisive and he’s content being the dog of the council. If someone killed his women, I think he will just watch in the sidelines. What a trash guy. He should’ve been OP with his cheat but we got this wimpy submissive guy as an MC.
Isn’t he a reincarnator? Why is he so weak? You’re not utilizing his Sacred Gear properly. I mean, isn’t Devil Magic based on imaginations? Why doesn’t he utilize his powers properly? Instead of nerfing him, you decided to stunt his growth? He should’ve been OP before attending Kuoh Academy.
What’s the point of training that Issei? I don’t think he deserves that kind of charity. This is the second strike for me in this story. The first one was when he give in easily to the demand of the City Lord. You should read The Wish of a Dragon. Look how that Issei treated his counterpart. HAHA.
I hope you don’t help that world’s Issei. Just like what you did to your Jaune.