Why not just call it a zebra crossing 🤔

Send me them power stones bishhhh. Don't be greedy. Let's make a trade powerstones for chapters or even better collections for chapters Every +100 PS = +2 chapters +100 Collections = +2 chapters +200 PS = Extra content (LORE, Character Fact File) Top PS giver will be provided a chance to make an interactive decision in the book every month :)

Shameless Author review! With the start of the Spirity contest, I decided to join it with this book of mine. SO check it out and send me those shiny stones, as well as constructive criticism and advice down below. CONSTRUCTIVE YOU HEARD, YES CONSTRUCTIVE!

I really like your story premise, and find the characters are realistic and don't feel 2d and flat. The story has plenty of potential and could expand /go down multiple different routes. Little thing to polish up on would be grammar here and there which could be done by proofreading, but by no way does it detract from the story (it's only minor). Overall very good job done.

A really interesting premise and execution that has plenty of potential. I've only read 4 chapters so far, however from what I've read it's been very enjoyable. I especially like the world building in use as well as the sense of mystery portrayed that provokes the reader to really think on matters such as the true purpose for why the organisation is making them participate in the events. As well as the limitations of the world they are in. A minor qualm and improvement that I'm sure that could be easily fixed, is the sudden appearance of something for the sake of the plot. I feel that at times the reason why something happens can be quite unnatural but I'm sure it can get better with practice. Overall, I would definitely reccomend you to pick this up as it's an excellent read.

Good chapter, however I feel that the idea of why the demon chose him as a partner should be explained further than just 'he needs a host to survive'. However apart from that really excellent immersion.

Seems like there is a tiny bit of plot armour creep here. There was supposedly a demon who supposedly had a potion and supposedly helped by giving it to a human who was in dire need of it.

*Sniff**sniff*, I smell a shady organisation.

Story seems really interesting and engaging so far.

I really enjoyed the story so far. What went well- very good building of the setting with intriguing characters to back it up. In depth view of the characters and their thought process. Improvements- tone a tad bit down with the description,especially of the girs, as too much of it makes it lose it’s purpose and can instead make it seem repetitive. Overall enjoyable read. Keep it up.

A very enjoyable premise for the story so far, nice twist on the genre. Author has nice 3 dimension characters who feel lifelike and interesting and the overall flow of the story is connected by seamless grammar and structure.

Ive placed the novel on pause for an extended period of time to work on other novel ideas that i’ve been wanting to try. I plan to pick up on the novel at a later date but id advise you to spend your ps on something else for the meantime.

Knock nock. Who's there. Another shameless author rating their story 5 stars. Are you interested in a weak to strong MC? An evolution system? A webnovel following a man of culture?

The curse of the exams, have prevented me from reaching my full potential.

Shameless review on the market. Buy one get one free! Check this system novel out. I might be feeding you dumpster trash but don't worry this is not ordinary dumpster trash but super good dumpster trash. So I hope you enjoy this dumpster diving ride. Send me powerstones. Thx I'm out. -Rayver

I can work with that. This is kind of a side project, which I'm not expecting too much out of. I just wanted to try this sort of system story so it might start out very generic and with quite a few cliches. However, hopefully down the path the story and quality will improve. Thank you for the constructive criticism though.

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I'll be honest. Your book has potential lots of potential and I think it's funny and great from what I've read so far. Pros: Good usage of humour, good world build up and interesting plot Cons: Grammar can be incorrect quite a few times, not unreadable but needs to be fixed, sometimes the characters feel a bit one dimensional. Overall it's a good novel, keep on writing and I'm sure your future will be filled with great things.

Stable start to the story so far. Seems quite interesting from what I can tell. Overall good grammar can't fault it which is always impressive to see. Keep it up!

Enjoyable book, well done, It was a real pleasant read. Likeable MC , check Flowing Storyline, check Good grammer and sentence structure, check Keep up the good work.