Review Detail of RayVer in Conceited Dragon

I'll be honest. Your book has potential lots of potential and I think it's funny and great from what I've read so far. Pros: Good usage of humour, good world build up and interesting plot Cons: Grammar can be incorrect quite a few times, not unreadable but needs to be fixed, sometimes the characters feel a bit one dimensional. Overall it's a good novel, keep on writing and I'm sure your future will be filled with great things.