Review Detail of RayVer in Truth and Family: A God's Journey

I really enjoyed the story so far. What went well- very good building of the setting with intriguing characters to back it up. In depth view of the characters and their thought process. Improvements- tone a tad bit down with the description,especially of the girs, as too much of it makes it lose it’s purpose and can instead make it seem repetitive. Overall enjoyable read. Keep it up.