The story itself has a great and interesting premise, though there's not a lot of chapters out right now, we can expect some great things in the future. I'd say the only thing that irks me is the pacing. If the story moves just a tad bit slower and everything is well explained and foreshadowed, it'd be a richer experience. Grammar wise, it's quite solid, though there's some typo's here and there. I'd say the author is doing a great job, because while reading the story I could definitely see the complexity of the world background. The fight scenes in the beginning also had many elements, but overall I do think it could use some gravitas. Good work though! Hope you continue writing.

Pov: Kabr when he realized that actions have consequences.

I mean, unless you don't have to survive? Boy's kinda immortal innit.

Man I feel you. I played D1 on a borrowed disk from a friend, cuz he didn't like the game at all. An insane adventure from start to finish.

I aim to please my good sir!

Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened.

Thanks for reading the book, hope everything's going good for you.

Will check em out, though I've read some of them already. Wouldn't hurt to revisit ig.

Have to give credit where its due, Snolly's the man when it comes to HP rn. I am on the lookout for others tho. Lmk if you guys find some interesting fics.

Being sterile has nothing to do with organs of any kind. Simply put, Guardians cannot have children. From a biological perspective, they are incapable of it. There might be several explanations, but no one really knows why.

Snolly my man, I've been stockpiling for quite a while. Finally read it all. Can't wait for more.

mb back then I wasn't aware of that

Bruv

I am genuinely shook this legendary series is still going. I recall I read this when I first started on WN 4 years ago. I've come a long way and apparently so have you, author. I really want this series to have a good ending, so I hope you keep writing until it finds peace with the readers. Thanks for all the memories! I cherished them all sincerely.

Didn't know the French read my fics.

The cope is hard with this one. But I suppose you'll need to read the next few chapters to find out what really happens.

Technically, guardians have all the organs, however they are sterile. They cannot have children.

There's a lot of ghosts, but they choose their guardians. Honestly, it was just a start for the story. A stagnation in the population of guardians, and then our MC finally rises. This is soon followed by the players after an arc.

I do think they're a nice addition, so I've kept them in. Though to be candid, D1 raids were very unrefined. Great, but unrefined. A lot of the refurbished raids do very well in that regard. Except maybe kings fall. That raid was downright amazing in D1.

Fun fact, I had recently rewatched The Martian while I was writing that chapter. Interesting coincidence imo.