Review Detail of Writers_Ablood in Death God's System

The story itself has a great and interesting premise, though there's not a lot of chapters out right now, we can expect some great things in the future. I'd say the only thing that irks me is the pacing. If the story moves just a tad bit slower and everything is well explained and foreshadowed, it'd be a richer experience. Grammar wise, it's quite solid, though there's some typo's here and there. I'd say the author is doing a great job, because while reading the story I could definitely see the complexity of the world background. The fight scenes in the beginning also had many elements, but overall I do think it could use some gravitas. Good work though! Hope you continue writing.