Naruhodo!

As for some details you've pointed out, I actually haven't changed them. I think in the previous version, MC does see Traveler from the Cosmodrome. But to be honest, it's not exactly seeing Traveler but just the white hue of it. The primary changes were from 1st pov to 3rd pov and ofc slightly improved descriptions.

The Mad Rogue reading my series....hmm Interesting.

Thank you for the analysis, yes I had to sit through my own cringe to kinda update it a bit. It does seem AI (ish) because the dialogue as compared to the recent chapters is very rigid. I haven't changed that. There's still somethings I've got to refine, but the chapter is about 3k words and its quite difficult to get write. I am slowly rewriting the first 7, and then probably going back to updates.

But what do I get in return?...... Ok, I was busy doing some rewrites for the first few chapters because they were horrendous. Kinda busy with that. I'll cook up the new chap soon. But I got tests in June so I'm kinda busy.

The story itself has a great and interesting premise, though there's not a lot of chapters out right now, we can expect some great things in the future. I'd say the only thing that irks me is the pacing. If the story moves just a tad bit slower and everything is well explained and foreshadowed, it'd be a richer experience. Grammar wise, it's quite solid, though there's some typo's here and there. I'd say the author is doing a great job, because while reading the story I could definitely see the complexity of the world background. The fight scenes in the beginning also had many elements, but overall I do think it could use some gravitas. Good work though! Hope you continue writing.

Pov: Kabr when he realized that actions have consequences.

I mean, unless you don't have to survive? Boy's kinda immortal innit.

Man I feel you. I played D1 on a borrowed disk from a friend, cuz he didn't like the game at all. An insane adventure from start to finish.

I aim to please my good sir!

Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened.

Thanks for reading the book, hope everything's going good for you.

Will check em out, though I've read some of them already. Wouldn't hurt to revisit ig.

Have to give credit where its due, Snolly's the man when it comes to HP rn. I am on the lookout for others tho. Lmk if you guys find some interesting fics.

Being sterile has nothing to do with organs of any kind. Simply put, Guardians cannot have children. From a biological perspective, they are incapable of it. There might be several explanations, but no one really knows why.

Snolly my man, I've been stockpiling for quite a while. Finally read it all. Can't wait for more.

mb back then I wasn't aware of that

Bruv

I am genuinely shook this legendary series is still going. I recall I read this when I first started on WN 4 years ago. I've come a long way and apparently so have you, author. I really want this series to have a good ending, so I hope you keep writing until it finds peace with the readers. Thanks for all the memories! I cherished them all sincerely.

Didn't know the French read my fics.