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Rabbitdreamss

Rabbitdreamss

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2021-02-01 JoinedGlobal
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Replied to Rabbitdreamss

    Btw it's hilarious XD

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    Larry Bottem and the Sorcerer's Scone
    Fantasy · Jake_Aroling
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Posted

    The main character is very unique and fun to follow along with. The story's pace and writing quality are both top-notch love it! The author has established the world background quite well as well.

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    The Chronicles of the Deadly Dead
    Fantasy · David Neilsen
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Posted

    Love the Harry Potter element, it adds spice to this story. I can't wait for more updates on this amazing piece. You did a great job with the pace of the story development even though it only has 8 chapters.

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    Larry Bottem and the Sorcerer's Scone
    Fantasy · Jake_Aroling
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Posted

    This has a very interesting world that I can see develop into something big. The usage of short syntax was a bit too often in the first chapter but it did succeed in building the suspense. Other than that it's fabulous, can't wait for future updates!

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    New World's End
    Fantasy · TailsOfHope
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Posted

    The story development is very well-paced. The medical element embedded adds to the mysteriousness of the story. I can't wait for what is about to happen in future chapters!

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    DarkMan
    Fantasy · GenXPrays
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Replied to AmateurAuthor

    Thank you for your review I will work hard on that!

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    To Fall Faster than a Romance Novel
    Fantasy · Rabbitdreamss
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Replied to Wolfgirl1215

    Thank you for the review and constructive critisim will work harder on that!

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    To Fall Faster than a Romance Novel
    Fantasy · Rabbitdreamss
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Replied to SolAce

    Thank you so much for the review I will do my best to improve!

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    To Fall Faster than a Romance Novel
    Fantasy · Rabbitdreamss
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Posted

    You have an amazing MC who is very unique and a strong character. Your writing quality is very nice and story development is steady. Keep up with the hard work!

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    A Portrait Of A Witch
    Fantasy · Yellowpup
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Posted

    I have not much to say, this was amazing, absolutely breathtaking novel. The prologue with a small play on mind was a great introduction that really hooked me in!

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    Memories Like a Dagger
    Fantasy · SolAce
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Posted

    This story is definitely worth the read. You get hooked on the first chapter! Writing quality is great and the stability of updates is amazing! GO READ IT, IT'S SUPERB!

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    When Blood Runs Cold
    Fantasy · Wolfgirl1215
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Posted

    It has a very interesting storyline! It's worth the read. The only thing to comment on was the grammar and paragraph splitting however, it does gradually get better! Keep up the hard work!

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    LoanShark Devil Guy
    Action · Faysal_Ahmed_5058
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Posted

    It is has a very interesting world setting. The way the MC builds up is fantastic! The writing quality is also top notch. With only a few chapters this has been amazing!

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    Tales of the Rebirth Apocalypse Emperor
    LGBT+ · AmateurAuthor
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Posted

    Love the action and opening starting with a fight with an eerie beast. Writing quality is top-notch great descriptions of the battle field. Keep it up author it's great!

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    The Veiled Worlds
    Fantasy · The_divine_oracle
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Commented

    Great description!

    A pitch-black metallic horn lay on the beast's nose. Jagged teeth that were sharper than blades, dripped with blood and tissues. Legs, as wide as Liam's body stomped on the ground, splitting it. The gray skin had the appearance of armor crafted out of steel.
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    The Veiled Worlds
    Fantasy · The_divine_oracle
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Posted

    This book is fascinating; the writing quality is astounding, and the switch between reality and fantasy was creative! I'm still quite amazed at your mention of Covid 19 XD Haven't seen that in any other books yet! Keep up the great job.

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    What Do You Mean I Am The Sage? [Paused]
    Fantasy · The_Abyss_Returner
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Commented

    I was so shocked to see covid 19!!

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    What Do You Mean I Am The Sage? [Paused]
    Fantasy · The_Abyss_Returner
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Replied to Aeipathy_02

    Thank you for the review!!!

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    To Fall Faster than a Romance Novel
    Fantasy · Rabbitdreamss
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Replied to DyaAran

    Thank you for your review!!

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    To Fall Faster than a Romance Novel
    Fantasy · Rabbitdreamss
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  • Rabbitdreamss
    Rabbitdreamss3yr
    Replied to Miss_Catastrophe

    Thank you for the Review!

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    To Fall Faster than a Romance Novel
    Fantasy · Rabbitdreamss
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