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With adorable interactions and bold characteristics befitting of a tried and true reporter, the FL is truly a lady I wish to observe, watching her grow into a dependable woman. And though romance might not be your cup of tea, the mystifying circumstances around her is enough to keep you glued to your seat, waiting for more. There are two issues I wish to address however: 1. Grammatical errors: Since these are the beginning chapters of your book, I would suggest recorrecting the misspellings, misplaced periods, and run-on sentences urgently to create good first impressions on your readers. Hopefully, I helped. :3 2. Spacing: This just chalks up to my preferences, but I normally prefer shorter paragraphs since it makes it easier on the eyes. Though it might be difficult if the descriptions are relating to the same event, I feel like it would be something to think about. Overall, I definitely reckon this is a hidden gem, which once polished, will shine from the rest. Although, I do need more chapters to be sure. XD So keep up the good work, Author !

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To Fall Faster than a Romance Novel

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Thank you so much for the review I will do my best to improve!