Blessed land this !!! BLESSED LAND THAT IN THE BLESSED LAND TOO MUCH BLESSED LANDS IN ONE SENTENCE !!!!!! Very horrible. the idea is good if only it was translated in a good way

Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! lol had to make enough characters xD

well, it's the kind of *Simple and enjoyable* novel. So far not much of the world is introduced but the pace is good and no cliches (Chapter 10), Looking forward for the future chapters. Good job author.

Please fix the grammar and punctuation ... all I've read was the first chapter and almost every paragraph has a mistake in it. it leaves a bad first impression so work on that while updating cause i like the idea of the story and I'd like to read more.

Honestly, I'm very annoyed by the info and flashbacks in the middle of the fight, i mean he could think all those while escaping not in the middle of the fight then get surprised by stuff happening x.x

كل سنه و انت طيب يسط xD

Don't stop writing this novel please, Your writing style is good even tho it's not an original but as ur first story i give you 5/5 thumps up man just for the original power up theme

A very interesting concept tbh , but it's weird talking about the past and the present like we already know about his past and it was never mentioned her recarniated or something in the very beginning. + GOD DAMN HE TALKS TO HIMSELF MUCH , SO MUCH INNER MONOLOUGE sheesh. so far i read up to chapter 22 and the way things are going he's like one rank behind the stongest beings ? just without a back up lol

Well , It's fulfilling , The character growth and changes are just amazing , the world is still not so clear until now but so far so good , the writing still is also good which is a relief lol

Is it a good novel tho ? i have it on book marks but the comments were not positive

honestly everything is perfect , the world , the writing , the background , how everything just connects , JUST SOOOOO SLOOOWWW UPDATES LIKE UGHHGHG

She's in the cover , so nope impossible unless he just wanna ruin his story xD

#Egyptian_Supremasy lol

it's kinda fresh and the writing style is very good with no mistakes and does not weigh down on you , author notes are very funny and the main character FINALLY HAS A BRAIN , PRAISE THE GODS IN ALL MULTIVERSES , i was soo done with typical MCs , so this novel is like rain after a long draught

This is just bad . it's SUPER SLOW , TOO MANY UN-IMPORTANT DETAILS, i had a bitter taste while reading it so , Nah not really worth it in my POV :c

I feel very conflicted , the idea , the story , the quality ARE TOP NOTCH but there are too much information dump with a some how slow progress. Yes the information was important but it can be simplified and explained on multiple times not a here you go all the info about this topic xD feel me ? aside from that and some stuff could have been slightly altered to make a better flow , i'll wait for more chapters patiently, please keep it up. ( out of review : i really don't like the writing about the side characters tbh to take entire 4 damn chapters but it's kinda new and i really can't say it's a negative thing , i just wants more progress for the main character xD )

i need more damn it

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