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I feel very conflicted , the idea , the story , the quality ARE TOP NOTCH but there are too much information dump with a some how slow progress. Yes the information was important but it can be simplified and explained on multiple times not a here you go all the info about this topic xD feel me ? aside from that and some stuff could have been slightly altered to make a better flow , i'll wait for more chapters patiently, please keep it up. ( out of review : i really don't like the writing about the side characters tbh to take entire 4 damn chapters but it's kinda new and i really can't say it's a negative thing , i just wants more progress for the main character xD )

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Earth's Alpha Prime

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