Of course both, also a piece of advice, don't do flashback chapters, it totally destroys the immersion of the work, if you want to tell stories about characters, use dialogues between the characters and through information about the world, things like TV, telephones, etc., that's it. helps to build mystery and this mystery does not always need to be solved, one of the examples we have in lookism is the king of seoul.

I went in thinking it would be more of the norm, stressed teenager gets a system and now all the girls are chasing him, all the men hate him and he slaps everyone in the face, but no, here I found a more realistic approach to this type of reality, the protagonist having friends is one of those things, he is also someone who accepts reality, the protagonist is not just an edge lord, dense isekai protagonist, who sees everything and everyone as XP, he is a human, evolving and with flaws, which you see being corrected throughout the chapters, the secondary characters have lives, opinions, desires and dreams, not only used as plot devices, here you understand why this character did this, what motivated him to do it, Now talking about the underworld, he is as realistic as possible, in the fact that the world is not black and white but a good mix of gray. I think that's what I have to say for now, I'll leave it 4.2 stars because it still has room to grow.

One of the best things about this fanfic is the author's charismatic writing, it makes you really immersed in the story, along with the dialogues being able to express the emotion that the author wanted to express, it is still at the beginning, but any work with these characteristics has the potential to become a well-cut diamond, good work

First time seeing a child's sincerity being so well represented in a fanfic

Yes

I think it would be very interesting for the Hanju gang to get involved with creating online casinos, and with superstar management companies, thus creating their own economic system with free advertising for the online casino, another thing I would like to see is a hanju's greater interest in using the gang as a whole, not just the henchmen who hang around him and then he tells them to stand aside to watch him fight, I would like to see them care more about their futures and get sucked even more into the responsibility of an adult life (earning money, building a family, etc.), this is something that is very much missing from the original work (although I understand that everyone is a teenager full of hormones), and also those moments of fun with the boys, parties and spending hard-earned money. I think I went too far to impose my demands, but I hope the author highlights key points in this comment, but I won't forget that the author's vision is what matters.

The Gu World may be scary, but nothing beats reality, one of the examples you can find by searching"siege of Maarate Anumane" and what they did to the people of that City.

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a fanfic from the Star Citizen universe, something I really didn't expect, and when I saw that the author was Trafford, many of my doubts about reading this fanfic were extinguished, reputation really does wonders in this job market. (and one thing, author, I think you will enjoy exploring the lore of warframe😉😉)

I played a little with Dall•E 3 and this was my result (I couldn't make it capture some of the references I wrote but I don't think it turned out bad)

I will not surrender

Don't apologize for telling the Truth

Everything becomes so easy when you realize that most of the limits are in your head, that your mind limits you to achieving greater things, the moment you realize this You BECOME INVINCIBLE

You can find his works here in the webnovel, one of the best and which I have already finished is The Hammer Effect

I feel like the author will know this story "The Monster Without a Name / The Nameless Monster"

Some knowledge to help my male friends on this journey through life: if you think she's perfect, see all the good things she is (at least in your view), chances are that someone else also thinks she's like that, you're always in a style of competition, and the competition doesn't end when you conquer it but it truly begins after that, so boys be like me and ruin other people's happiness by flirting with as many girls as possible

No problem, also know that the name I gave you is abbreviated and that the real name is someone real who lived with the same thinking style as the protagonist (he is also famous for it)

But if it is not possible, I believe that the cyberpunk world has a lot to offer, especially with the artificial intelligence that has not been much explored in the cyberpunk universe

the world I'm going to talk about is a little unknown, but each fight, each scenario and drawing of it made me reflect, this world is well used to the moral theme (yes, there are old hypocrites), the world in question is Legend Of The Northern Blade, the only problem I see in this world is the level of power that grows to absurd levels and that is also sideways and a little uncertain even when looking at the wiki. but one thing is for sure, I trust you to bring this world of wonderful mysteries to life (and I'm also sorry because the work/novel/manhua is not finished yet) but it's a very treacherous world where you can't trust the narrator or any character.

The world I'm going to talk about is a little unknown, but each fight, each scenario and drawing of it made me reflect, this world is well used to the moral theme (yes, there are hypocrites elders), the world in question is Legend Of The Northern Blade, the only problem I see in this world is the level of power that grows to absurd levels and that is also sideways and a little uncertain even when looking at the wiki. but one thing is for sure, I trust you to bring this world of wonderful mysteries to life (and I'm also sorry because the work/novel/manhua is not finished yet) but it's a very treacherous world where you can't trust the narrator or any character.