This is everything you would expect of a chinese webnovel. face-slaps (not a whole lot in this one luckily but there are some) A supposedly weak mc class with strong monsters where the mc becomes stronger then his summons. for some reasons chinese authors hate the idea of the mc himself being weak and having OP followers. I stil have no idea why they even bother writing summoners/taming novels if the mc is going to be as strong or stronger then his summons/beasts and also much stronger then someone who has lets say a sword saint class. Now the mc also has this cheat which lets him do EVERYTHING. So basicly godly mc who can do it all who makes every girl fall for him by simply excisiting, throw in some evil organisation and lots of battles and you got your chinese webnovel, including this one. I would rate it 1 star if i was personally biased against it but the background sounds fun but isnt explored or explained, story so far isnt bad and updates are fast. character and translation is terrible tho.

I don't feel like writing a long review but i see a lack of reviews and do not want to see the author not motivated to continue. Do read the story as i do recomend to give it a try. My review wil probably seem rather negative but it is simply because i am writing things i feel that the author could improve upon. The story itself is good, chapters are long. writing: Very little to point out. Some very minor mistakes here and there which mostly just fast writing mistakes. (random example not in the story: continioys.) I do not remember which words but the author probably pressed the wrong letter on accident and did not find out. I have only seen one or two of them. updates; I dont know, wish more but is somewhat consistent probably? Story: It is moving along, wish to see more on how blacksmithing is done. I also personally hope that there wont be any guns and cannons at some point but i wil find out. Character; they seem alive but yet somehow feel simple. The characters lack a certain depth to them. Battle fanatic only thinks of battle. Researcher only thinks of researching. They are somewhat predictable and simplistic in their thoughts. World; The world is big and all and places are rather well described. The only thing i find lacking is that places arent described enough. What does the town lay-out look like? How does the square and surrounding buildings look like? Only some places are well described in more details but i feel like a lot is just glossed over. Stil i read everything so far (offline and had not used the acc) and i wil continue to read either as soon as a chapter drops or when there are more chapters.

I see, then i wil assume that for the flow of the story that the author wrote ancients and did not mean it more literal.

One of the lowest scores i have ever given... Synopsis of this book in my eyes: Human reincarnates as a stray dog in a wolf pack. The humanly stray dog influences the wolves into becoming tame and accepting wolves. After the wolves are tamed and the stray dog becomes stronger he gets involved with humans. After discovering these humans, the stray dog evolves into a normal dog. The normal dog has found it's owner and place called China, That is basicly the entire story... These kind of stories always end the same when humans are involved and especially the nationalism if it's a chinese author. I havent read far enough for there to be nationalism but i am confident enough to say there wil be a lot eventually. So to the scoring it is. translation: cop paste google translate quality. Updates: hasnt been updated for a month now story: It was fun until humans showed up. So about 150 chapters are interesting, not good but just fun enough to pass time. Fun interaction with pack, father wolf and mother wolf played a role. Humans show up and father and mother wolf get sidelined, no more really pack expansion, only level up. character; i did not hate the characters but damn are they 1 dimensional. background: earth gets qi and shit happends. The background is that lacking.

While i can see your reasoning and think it makes sense... they are assumptions. Unless the author tells us why, this wil make no sense. Maybe the mc has a bloodline of a wolf? Maybe a meteor flashed by just as the wolf saw the mc? Again, i think your reasoning is solid and probably true but if it isn't explained in the story then it makes no sense.

Read up to pay for view chapters and dont want to download the app. So the review is up to chapter 44 and the score is based on a novel that wants to earn money. (Its a harsher score then some first time novel writers or fanfics.) Writing 4: No glaring mistakes found here. No big grammar mistakes and the sentences flow. It is written as a very light read. Stability 3: i checked and it isn't very stable. It is released around every 2 to 4 days but you wil be left uncertain exactly how many days there is between each chapter. Story 2: Very old man reincarnates and becomes OP. That is basicly the story. Where i got at chapter 44 you learn a little more and a big plot or arc seems to be coming but for the first 44 chapters there is none. Character 2: The mc is either mentally handicapped or the author has failed in his mission to write about someone who is 80+. The mc sounds more like a 15 to 20 years old who got reincarnated but if he was then all his previous life skill would make no sense. As such i believe the author wrote him as old. The parents are very accepting of everything around the mc to a fault. Furthermore the 3 females introduced are like most harem novels, just plain dumb when it involves the mc. Background 4: Actually enjoy the background and the abilities sounds nice. I do recommend to give it a try if you like a read where it doesnt go in depth. It's good for your casual i dont want to think and just read moments.

I have only read 10 chapters so my score is more lenient then usual. Writing: It is readable but you can tell he used MTL and admits it, so some spelling and grammar mistakes are present but not too much. Stability; I just gave it a 5... i dont know if its stable or not. Story; The author has made the urban fantasy novel/movies of harry potter into a High fantasy novel. The mc is able to do things he shouldn't be able to do even in a urban fantasy standard. (creating magic without blowing up things or dying, being good at everything etc.) But the ideas the mc has and the pacing outside of his learning is good and i dont know how it wil develop so i gave it a 4. Character: I would give it a 1 if i had read more then what i did and if nothing changed. So far the mc has no personality to speak of. Hes very bland as a person and i can hardly feel any connection to the mc. (I dont feel like the characters are alive) Also the mc should be named Gary and not Ethan... even for a fanfiction there should be a limit to how godly a mc should be. Background: While the world around the mc is not very much described (i stil dont know the lay-out of his house, yard or anything) It stil is a harry potter world. So in conclusion, some wil love the OP mc and the story and others wil hate it. As for me? I could not get into the story. The story is too high fantasy in an urban fantasy setting for me. (MC being able to create spells and fight trained teens or maybe beat adults etc,.. but mostly creating spells. Luna her mother died because of it and she was a genius at it but the mc here? his half baked fanfic and canon knowledge lets him create spells without truly understanding magic? And not mention of any accident happening during his testing? It is too much even for a fanfic in my opinion... yours might be different)

Agreed fully, especially know what happend to Luna her mother. She was a genius at spells but died due to experimenting with it.

Overall score is a 4 i suppose. The writing quality is quite bad at the start but gets better later on. You can tell the author is improving his english as he writes. Updates are stable enough... probably... havent looked at it nor cared. Story: I am liking and hating it at the same time. The mc is close to a gary stu atm and it is what is starting to make me want to drop this novel. Im at chapter 148 now and small spoiler but the mc has only lost once but was never in actual danger... or atleast dindt feel like it. (he even won against his latest opponent at 146-148 who he should not have beaten) As such trying to not be biased against a troupe i very much hate (gary stu mcs) I wil give this a 4 as everything else is good. The story is flowing nicely altho a bit fast with how strong they get. Character: like what i said in story the mc is a gary. The rest of the crew feels like a mix of straw hats and oc. The crews personalities is heavily influenced by straw hats. I would have liked to see a more original dynamic of the crew but i suppose it is fine as is but because of all the mentioned above the score is a 3. Background... well its one piece and the world and everything surrounding it just sounds fascinating. (This review got a bit of my biased in it but not too much) So overall a good story, the start is a bit bad because grammar. The grammar improves but the story starts lacking as time goes on. (You can probably tell whats going to happen in the mini arcs in one or two chapters)

Thank you for the trouble.

Don't want to write a review with only reading 9 chapters but i felt like saying a few things. I am guessing when you wrote the first few chapters you were excited with things to come. But due to this you rushed trough the beginning too quickly to get to the good parts i suppose. The first few chapters are important to get the readers attention. Not showing magic to the parents as proof wasnt a good choice. The quick shopping spree, the whole train ride, the interaction with costumers could be fleshed out way more to draw a reader in. Instead you finished those things as quickly as you could while progressing the plot. (This is my opinion, i am not a writer but i felt like it missed these things. Doesnt mean to draw it out and make 10 chapters about it but fleshing it out a bit more instead of the bones you had now) Btw sad to say but i wont continue to read since he joined Gryff. If he had joined any other house i might continue but i dont read fanfictions where the new mc joins the old mc. (even if it gets better 50+ chapters in)

A copy of Astral pet but atleast wih this story there is pet selling. That being said... i feel like the shop isnt the actual main focus but instead just a crux for the mc to get stronger. I did not get the feel of it being an actual story about a shop owner like lets say pet king. The shop is just a thing to improve the mc. So my score is on the rather low side because of it. Quality and updates are good, story is bad and character is as well. World sounds awesome tho. For those reading the review, do give it a try to see if you do like it. (specially if you like astral... which i did not)

Best score i can give after reading 300+ chapters. Pet stoore??? His pet store has sold 0 pets so far. He only sells pet training... which stopped being interesting as the training gets skipped. Events are generic xiaxia template. And the mc is a brick with anger issues. The pets are awesome tho and the skills are they use are well written. The side character could be worse. The world/worlds are interesting. overall a mediocre novel that did not live up to the hype of its score or top reviews.

He lied. This story has nothing to do with that author. Chinese name of the other novel = 我的分身把低武练成了仙武 The chapters go up to 147 or so and the story isn't good. (again no relation to this story)

It is a well written story. The pacing doesnt feel neither too slow or fast. The world background is obviously from pokemon but more or less everything thrown in at random (which isnt bad) The story development is good, as he slowly trains and such at the point where i dropped this story. (chapter 26 or so... when he got his second pokemon without effort) The story is updated often enough if you ask me, so that is good. The character tho... i have a personal dislike for the mc. I do not like how he is edgy and snarky at one moment and then is suddenly shown as domineering or have domineering thoughts. It just puts me off as i dont think you can be both. (again this is personal taste) Other then that the character isnt bad. As for other characters... I did not get to know any other character long enough to actually know them. (unless you count a pokemon but i dont) So overall its a very good fanfic and a good read. The reason i dropped it is simply because of the dislike of the mc. I cant read a story about someone i dont like.

Im a little confused about the line of : the ancients said diao chan was.... Diao chan is a fictional character of ROTK purely fictional. So is this based on the real TK or ROTK?

Cai Yan wasnt named Wenji until the Jin Dynasty was established. Her courtesy name was Zhaoji not Wenji at this time period.

A good novel but not great. Missing a lot of background info about the mc. Why is his int and diplamcy so high? Has he any fighting expierence? How does he remember so much details about the TK period? There are just too many questions and no answers concerning the mc. I mean does force level mean you can fight a powerful warrior if you have no fighting expierence or does the mc know how to fight? Stability is good, nothing to complain about... unless you're greedy. Story development, i am liking where it is going so far... just hope the writer doesn't take it too far and brings every well known general to his side. Would be rather boring... Character, too many questions and no answers. Also everyone else too easily in awe, so yeah.... bad score here. World, its ROTK so its great.

Been reading the raws and while i first wrote another review, i do not believe it anymore. Translation/updates - No problems here Story - Lots of problems here. You can replace the clan with a company and it makes no difference. The tamed beast dont appear in the story often and is only used as transportation (and luck gathering) othen then that they may as well not exist. The mc is way above the rest of the clan in cultivation as such, the clan is of no help in any fight and doesnt really appear. character - At the start the characters are stil a little fleshed out but as the story goes on they all become 2d. They have no thoughts of their own. Everyone is impressed by the mc intellect and planning even tho the reader prob wouldnt be (everyone but mc dumb) World background - There is none... Nothing is really explained or detailed enough, everything is left for you to imagine how it looks like. You get the bare minimum to work with and thats it. (I would personally stil rate it higher to about a 3.5 or 4 simply because i do enjoy reading it but there are a lot of flaws that can anger someone)

御兽世家的崛起最新章节 - Try that one, first one was traditional chinese this one is simplified. uukanshu dot com is a good one to find it on.