Review Detail of Tricklet in Pokemon: Grounded Youth

It is a well written story. The pacing doesnt feel neither too slow or fast. The world background is obviously from pokemon but more or less everything thrown in at random (which isnt bad) The story development is good, as he slowly trains and such at the point where i dropped this story. (chapter 26 or so... when he got his second pokemon without effort) The story is updated often enough if you ask me, so that is good. The character tho... i have a personal dislike for the mc. I do not like how he is edgy and snarky at one moment and then is suddenly shown as domineering or have domineering thoughts. It just puts me off as i dont think you can be both. (again this is personal taste) Other then that the character isnt bad. As for other characters... I did not get to know any other character long enough to actually know them. (unless you count a pokemon but i dont) So overall its a very good fanfic and a good read. The reason i dropped it is simply because of the dislike of the mc. I cant read a story about someone i dont like.