Review Detail of Tricklet in Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

I have only read 10 chapters so my score is more lenient then usual. Writing: It is readable but you can tell he used MTL and admits it, so some spelling and grammar mistakes are present but not too much. Stability; I just gave it a 5... i dont know if its stable or not. Story; The author has made the urban fantasy novel/movies of harry potter into a High fantasy novel. The mc is able to do things he shouldn't be able to do even in a urban fantasy standard. (creating magic without blowing up things or dying, being good at everything etc.) But the ideas the mc has and the pacing outside of his learning is good and i dont know how it wil develop so i gave it a 4. Character: I would give it a 1 if i had read more then what i did and if nothing changed. So far the mc has no personality to speak of. Hes very bland as a person and i can hardly feel any connection to the mc. (I dont feel like the characters are alive) Also the mc should be named Gary and not Ethan... even for a fanfiction there should be a limit to how godly a mc should be. Background: While the world around the mc is not very much described (i stil dont know the lay-out of his house, yard or anything) It stil is a harry potter world. So in conclusion, some wil love the OP mc and the story and others wil hate it. As for me? I could not get into the story. The story is too high fantasy in an urban fantasy setting for me. (MC being able to create spells and fight trained teens or maybe beat adults etc,.. but mostly creating spells. Luna her mother died because of it and she was a genius at it but the mc here? his half baked fanfic and canon knowledge lets him create spells without truly understanding magic? And not mention of any accident happening during his testing? It is too much even for a fanfic in my opinion... yours might be different)