Sara_Weber_9938
I enjoyed writing and exploring my creative side. It's been a while since I wrote anything but that's why I am trying to get back into it to help my depression. Time gap Queen and the Alpha Apex Predators is the novel I am currently working on. Feel free to check it out. Most people like it, so maybe you might too if you try it out. Lost Unknown Queen is on pause because I will be rewriting to better improve it.
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Sara_Weber_99381dReplied to pantserplotter- Sara_Weber_99381dPosted
Excellent story! The story flow is at the right pace. Each chapter unfolds the MC's training quite nicely, and it's detailed to give you a good image of how he is training. The heartfelt moments are just heartbreaking and heartwarming between the Mc and his family. This novel is written for anybody, and I can't wait to see more unfold.
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Later on 🤣
Later on, the clone had hopped into the cloth. - Sara_Weber_99387dPosted
I must say, this novel is so exotic! It's one of those novels that you'll need to read with some popcorn. The first chapter starts so heartbreaking and sentiment but then what happens next will shock you like electricity. If you like amusing written horror, add this to your library because it's worth it.
- Sara_Weber_99388dReplied to NixelLazuli
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Why am I picturing a zombie runway
The zombie stood up and looked at his reflection , using only one eye , because the little girl's eye didn't work . Slowly the zombie gazed at himself from head to toe . Here is what he saw ; - Sara_Weber_99388dCommentedThe zombie went into the bedroom , and here he stopped and walked in . Unlike the other rooms , this room was less ... dirty but far more gruesome . Skulls and faces were on the wall , held by their hair on hooks .
- Sara_Weber_99389dCommented
You just have to shift this up to fit it with the the dialogue. But I do understand working from phones can make it tricky.
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What!!! 🤣🤣🤣
"Honestly Seran your attention span is weaker than wet noodles between chopsticks. On the other hand, it's kind of quirky you walked all this way daydreaming." - Sara_Weber_99389dCommentedAs I entered the room, I saw a horrifying sight: snakes covered every inch of the walls, floor, and ceiling. I was shocked and overwhelmed. The snakes' beady eyes fixed on me like predators sensing prey. I drew my sword, ready for battle. The air was thick with the stench of venom and decay. I charged forward, swinging my sword in wide arcs to clear a path. But there were too many snakes, and they seemed to be everywhere. I stomped on one, but another took its place, its fangs bared and ready to strike. I spun and danced, using all my skills to avoid their deadly bites. But I knew I couldn't keep this up for much longer; I was getting tired, and the snakes showed no signs of relenting.
- Sara_Weber_99389dCommented
Never seems to catch a break 😳
I walked closer to the main door of the temple, the strange energy growing thicker and denser at an alarming rate, pressing me down with its weight. As I inched closer, I started hearing strange sounds - Hisssss, hisssss - the unmistakable hiss of snakes, sending a shiver down my spine. - Sara_Weber_99389dCommented
I hope they save him.
While this was going on, a boy not too well known in the tribe called Miracle was running for his life. He had encountered two apes who had crossed a threshold. At first, they were just toying with him, throwing him around and catching him, but now they were using their sharp nails to draw markings all around his body. - Sara_Weber_99389dCommented
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It moved with fangs out and attacked the armed man. The woman grinned in delight as the energy shifted from playing the damsel in distress to having the aura of a ruthless killer. - Sara_Weber_993811dPosted
First of all, this plot is overall interesting and so different from what you would normally read. Plot-wise, the creativity and imagination put into this story is excellent. The action and fights add a nice thrill to whole story. Also, there this is a touch of sadness to the story, and there is mysterious cloud over the MC, which I think will made any reader want to know more about him. Keep up the good work!
- Sara_Weber_993811dReplied to VeldarriaCh 3 **Ch 3: Back on Routine
- Sara_Weber_993812dCommentedJumping on the last branch with the antelope beneath, the branch broke!. Before I could bring out my short knife to hold the tree the antelope ran away, I was dazed my last hope was gone I even forgot I was falling of a tree.
- Sara_Weber_993812dCommentedCh 3 CHAPTER 3 - INTO THE WILDERNESS