Well, this story caught my attention because of the very high rating it has, but I must disagree with the 4.9 rating, reasons? Well, it has a giant problem. This is the typical story where the author doesn't know how to decide which arc to start his story with, and added all of them at the same time, plus it feels like a Chinese novel in a certain aspect, I'll explain that below. The story itself begins, it starts with the protagonist fighting the guy who stole his girlfriend, the protagonist defeats and humiliates him, that uncovers a plot about a very potent drug that for some convenient reason, no authority has discovered it and is being casually used by teenagers, well, brain dead logic, but no that's not the problem. The point is that after the protagonist's victory, the older brother of the guy who was humiliated, comes from absolute nowhere to control hypnotize an entire school AND AN ENTIRE POLICE BODY, nothing more to catch the protagonist. After that, some sort of random martial artist, decides not to give a damn about a guy who is hypnotizing hundreds of people, instead, he decides to go fight the protagonist, after that another doujin character (who coincidentally is not hypnotized) shows up and helps for some reason the protagonist. But that doesn't stop there, because not much later ANOTHER RANDOM CHARACTER shows up, to again go against the protagonist. This is what I mean when I say it looks like a Chinese cultivation novel, and not a good one. Protagonist reincarnated in a practically crippled (very weak) body: ✅ The protagonist has some sort of special power that works when it's convenient for the plot: ✅ A generic antagonist who immediately gets in the way of the protagonist: ✅ A random character who comes to avenge the previous protagonist: ✅ More random characters who come in a pack to go against the protagonist: ✅ The story rather than following a narrative course, it's as if the author took all the ingredients in his kitchen and threw them into the frying pan over high heat regardless of the composition of said ingredients, an absolute mess. The novel is fine at the level of grammar, the characters...meh, the protagonist? A muscle head who only thinks with his fists, meh. A plus for this story? It has few chapters, very few and everything is a mess, but it's still a plus because it has a lot of room for improvement. Is the story bad? I would say no, but its problems are not exactly few, definitely not for a 4.9, maybe 3.4 all things considered, if this story improves, this review will be deleted and updated.

By the way, Satan Class does not exist, the power scale goes up to Ultimate Class, the rest is fanon.

Certainly he is stronger Artemis is stronger than Grayfia, my doubt comes mostly from Issei's previous feats, he beat Kokabiel and tank his most powerful attacks, a guy who fought Vasco Strada Prime, who was the bane of any devil that wasn't Super Class (Sirzechs had respect for him though), then he defeats Vali JD with moderate difficulty, Vali Balance Breaker was already easily High Ultimate Class, Vali JD obviously far surpasses said power, Peak Ultimate Class for sure, Issei beat him, then if I remember correctly the chapter of their fight, he leveled up, so the difference shouldn't be abysmal, because I'm sure Vali JD from the biblical faction meeting arc, sweeps the floor with Grayfia every day of the week. That's why my question if this is AU, because if you take the canonical power scale, this is totally unbalanced everywhere you look, but being AU I can expect changes, as long as they don't break the established logic to the point of wrecking the already very flimsy power scale that the DxDVerse has, then all good, thanks for answering.

Are these factions AU? Why are the Greek gods in DxD OG not nearly as strong, only Hades (the strongest), Zeus and Apollo have worthy feats, and the latter isn't even that strong. And then if you add Orion, who isn't even a god, you're left with a very unbalanced power scale.

Facts.

The story is not bad, I would give it 4 stars, because the system seems good to me and the MC is not a pervert hungry for female flesh, the characters are solid and I like the detail that the MC's parents seem to care about him, and have critical thinking, instead of being brain dead NPC's, but this story needs a huge amount of editing, URGENTLY. 40% of the sentences are cut in half, leaving the rest separated into different paragraphs, example: Hello my name is Jeff. That's extremely annoying to read, especially for me, because English is not my mother tongue and sometimes I find it hard to understand what the fuck some characters mean. Otherwise, good start, an entertaining story that I can recommend if you have some free time, 3.8 stars and if the author corrects the mentioned mistakes, then I will delete this review and give it 4 stars.

In fact, going through ROOT is not such a bad idea, let's see, Danzo contrary to what many think, does not train shinobi for the purpose of sending them on daily suicide missions, the guy trains his personal army in the shadows to ensure large numbers of elite shinobi, the only concern to keep in mind is that to select said shinobi, they put them in death matches among their peers, something that would pose no challenge to the MC after receiving basic shinobi academy training, for it is a fact that an ordinary genin is hundreds of times stronger than an adult civilian. So I would propose in the future to have a narrative arc that encompasses ROOT training. Mostly because it offers three advantages that are very hard to ignore: Rigorous training by an elite shinobi like Danzo, based on stealth, reconnaissance, assassination and advanced shinobi arts. A deeper understanding of the organization, which offers insight into how to dismantle Danzo from the inside. An in-depth study of Danzo's character, giving the MC the ability to predict him with ease and eliminate him relatively easily.

Buen comienzo, sin muchos errores hasta ahora, espero más capítulos que sean igual de entretenidos..........................🗣🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

In fact it's not as forced as it seems, that change is usually more common than you think, have you never been in a situation where a particular news, action or event made you realize a flaw of yours, or the futility of your actions? The MC's father basically had an epiphany, seeing his wife leave him for absolutely nothing made him realize that the MC is not at fault, or at least that's how I interpret it.

Really? Good thing I don't care about the opinion of a WN noname who keeps licking the balls of a mononeuronal author, besides why would you care what I do with my life? Work on your thing loser, I don't need to brag on the internet about my personal accomplishments, I'm not an attention whore like you.

Are you retarded or do you like to pretend you are? You can't go around calling others assholes and acting smart when you have a secondary account just to spew hate on other people's stories, on top of that giving stupid arguments, besides you have a comment above that proves it, if you're going to choke on the subnormal's balls then do it in private.

Here, you can have it as a gift.

Absolutely right, instead of backtracking and correcting very noticeable blunders (in this case a very stupid characterization of Aizawa and using stupid nonsense arguments to justify a bad decision that hurts the whole story as a whole), they go on rants saying nonsense like that, the subjects by the simple fact of writing fanfics on a free platform boost their own tiny ego refusing to accept their mistakes and putting the responsibility on their readers.

Cold showers are beneficial for muscle growth accompanied by a good exercise, relaxes muscles and improves circulation, it also causes muscle spasms that stimulate the muscles. In addition to releasing a good amount of dopamine with long-term duration.

I recommend the author to retouch all this introduction, it is very evident that it is made by artificial intelligence which will scare many potential readers, I will give it a chance, but I strongly recommend doing everything by own hand, believe me when I tell you that a reader will always notice the effort and dedication in a story when it is made by human hand.

Notice that you have changed your argument from "Yuki does not affect the surrounding area" to "Yuki's attack will not be taken into account". I repeat again that stubbornness is a disease, my argument I already proved it and coupled with the author of the work has shouted in my face along with the rest of JJK viewers that Gojo is the strongest sorcerer of his time by absurd difference, for the good understander few words are needed.

There is a point where stubbornness becomes a disease, the massive increase of gravity on itself made it start to be an AOE attack, no need to give it too much thought.

gn

In case the author is wondering, the black hole quirk isn't a literal black hole, so it couldn't even jokingly nullify Limitless, it can't absorb light and it can't alter space-time like a real black hole (Kurogiri could warp 13's attack XDDDDDD, against a real BH that thing would probably implode on him.