Honestly I'd expect more exp.

It's an alright story. I've seen a lot better. only 40 chapters are free. Don't bother unlocking the rest. It was a waste. It seemed like the translation got worse. The system is barely used. His strength gain is DBZ levels of ridiculous with the numbers essentially meaning nothing. Anything that is mention that's kind of side story is immediate forgotten by the author and never gone back to. TL,DR: About a 4/10 probably won't even use fast pass to keep up with it.

So he just left the adventurers dead bodies? Didn't even loot them?

What happened to the Beast Horse?

If we're doing a time skip, Is he taking care of Jonah and the other 2's expenses? He only claimed to give 200 to each of the boys but didn't say he was helping the girl. I just assumed it was implied but nothing has ben said yet.

Dont read this story unless you plan on spending money. This is honestly a great story. I'll probably slowly read on with my passes. That said you can only read 170 chapters for free. At the current chapter length it will cost over $100 to read the whole thing. I refuse to give anyone that much money for 1 story. And thats per person.

Why did he not get a backlog of achievements? There should be a heck of a lot between just a decent sized faction to fully owning a kingdom. He didn't even get like, Kingslayer. He also completely routed 3 different forces.

There really aren't enough words to describe how good this fic is. I only found it less than a week ago and I read somewhere close to 40 hours worth of story to catch up to the last chapter posted. The premise is a poor soul has been re-incarnated into a weak puppy sized ant. He now has to grow, learn this dungeon system, and survive everyone he meets wanting to exterminate him and his kind. There is no point in the early story that lags. Everything keeps a great pace and the internal system is fantastic without overwhelming the reader with facts that can just be implied throughout the story. There are some great POV change chapters that give us an idea of the other races and the world in general. I have honestly seen few writers put out this much content and keep such great quality. There is also a Discord for readers. TL,DR: Highly recommend this fic for anyone that enjoys Gamer, Isekai, or just a good fantasy based story.

I just found this story. I'm so excited to start this journey. This is the exact kind of story I love.

I'm honestly unsure why this has such high reviews. That's the only reason why I started to read this fic and muddled through to chapter 12. There are some good bones to this story. A good basis and a possibly decent plot down the road. But it's painfully obvious that the writer is not a native English speaker nor is there much editing review done to the chapters. If the chapters were run through a quick beta it would make this at least a decent slice of life fic. But the lack of proper capitalization and punctuation pulls you out of the story. I'll be honest in stating that almost all of the first 12 chapters could have been condensed to about 5. He keeps saying that he doesn't want to give a play by play but that's really all it has been so far. We need like a blurb for every 50-100 years till you get to the modern time and the actual story. TLDR: Good bones, but not currently worth the time. I'll come back when it's been edited.

Literally this whole paragraph needs fixed. Multiple words are wrong and some phrases are off. Really through off the reader.

I'm a little annoyed that you left the cannon 'no Quidditch' in. It's an international sport that could be used greatly by the MC, politically. Not only that but he's not shown to have made any talks from his company's to make the events better for the public to see. Maybe you fix this in even the next chapter. By not seeing it and other exploits by now, with his future knowledge, it is making this supposedly genius level MC seem short sighted. He has super long term goals but never deals with things until it happens. Or plans for something way in advance that could have just been easily fixed.

This is a great addition to the series. It completes some plots and questions. The theoretics that are used are put together so well. I love the overall concepts that are used throughout this fic.

I've really enjoyed this series. Honestly you add such an interesting flair to HP that I wouldn't mind if you kept making different versions. Ill be interested in what ever you write next.

I don't get why he didn't just take it. Send it back to Flamel, plop it on Dumbledores desk afterwords. Anything but letting something bad happen. Same with just letting the trio go all the way through the traps.

Before I read more I wanted to put my thought down. I could see panicking at the end of the chapter for him. But he literally has portals down to an art. I'll see how you handle it but there's plenty of ways for him to survive the fall. Even pretending to get hurt to be taken to a Hydra base since he knows they took Bucky. Now, onward with the story!

Overall a good Gamer story. He's clearly OP and getting stronger but it still shows that there are those stronger and he doesn't understand all his own powers yet.

I'm loving this Fic. I just found it yesterday and read it all. I'm sad to see that it suddenly stopped. hopefully it will be picked back up soon.

It's interesting. But nothing new. The dialogue is cookie cutter, with quick and non-detailed interactions. It's just too bland for me. A good start, but overall the interactions leave much to be desired as it doesn't give us much insight into the MC other than a Mary Stu like character. Besides the plots already been given away with how the first chapter handles meeting people. I hope you continue to write for your own joy. But it's too vanilla and rushed for me.

It's interesting. But nothing new. The dialogue is cookie cutter, quick and non-detailed interactions, etc. It's just too bland for me. A good start, but overall the interactions leave much to be desired as it doesn't give us much insight into the MC other than a Mary Stu like character. Besides the plots already been given away with him being able to instantly steal someone like Magnetos power with no-one being the wiser. Xavier also wouldn't have been able to find him with this version of Gamer Mind as you have him completely immune to telepathy. This might get better. I hope you continue to write for your own joy. But it's too vanilla and rushed for me.