Review Detail of Loot_Ranger in Osmosian Gamer(Rewrite Up)

It's interesting. But nothing new. The dialogue is cookie cutter, with quick and non-detailed interactions. It's just too bland for me. A good start, but overall the interactions leave much to be desired as it doesn't give us much insight into the MC other than a Mary Stu like character. Besides the plots already been given away with how the first chapter handles meeting people. I hope you continue to write for your own joy. But it's too vanilla and rushed for me.