Feed back will be appreciated, always hungry for improvization

well i don't want to see a murderer and self justified mc if the mc is going to progress that way please drop this

meh... other could use .his ability as well totally a turn down for me

this story has a good concept but I have to admit one of the poorest written I've ever seen serious readers won't like it but it's still fun though

my friend you are my saviour

This is a type of work that get trash as it progresses It was really awesome till first 150 chapters then got really boring till the point that i might have fallen a sleep

But whose eye was that

Do all the authors nowadays think with their dick these dayss. .... Sigh. . *Exasperated* The story was awesome Just a simple version of warlock of the magus world but why the fuck is there an haremmm? ??, You wana popularize your work by adding boobs? ?And butts in play?

Sorry but Like always I'm commenting the faults once again Not pointing at this work but to all of the xuanhuan, xianxia or wixia Why do the mc have to be so high profile ,arrogant, the girls falling for him instantly /in a few daysormonths It's getting realllllly annoying and boring aswell

Wow What a cliche scene Just trust me😂😂 Deep sense of security Wow

Too cocky and arrogant for his own good Without plotarmour backing him up He'd die a million times over. He's not worthy to weild the power of jade emperor

SORRY BUT Isn't it being cruel than prideful ?

Had a lot of potential and got me hooked up but i started to get dissatisfied with a lot of things Mc is a straight dumb guy his smaller spore evolution game had a lot of flaws first flaw _players were able to see him And they even tried to kill him numerous time _he's hypocritical _game has a lot of pointless freedom its fine if players could go to the bigger world but why the fucl was slime guy able to return to the real world it has made the novel lose its taste I should have been like once you go to the other world Once youcdie in that world you die for real you won't be able to return _mc is incompetent so my suggestion is beready to get disappointed and quit this work its

Well It is one of the most uniquely written novels i've read ,certainly this fiction has potential but updating stability is a serious problem.

Seriously... Chicken nuggies or whatever needs to be removed

Yeah I always inadvertently read that phase and after reading it i feel like i wated my time.

That was hilarious 😂 The way he died was one of the legendary way to die comparable only to kazuma from konosuba

Hey I've just finished reading first and second chapter and I didn't like how the MC was so obsessed about being with his little crush ,so i thought if the novel if all about him being strong to revive his little crush .I'd rather not read this work So i wanted to know if he gets over his crush So that i can continue reading.

Yeah Typical xianxia romance plot

Is it just me or the mc is just being a really cold demon type guy from behind the scene