Review Detail of Laplaces_dream in [COMPLETED] TBATE | SHADOW MONARCH
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Everything is awesome except the main character. The main character even with 1000s of years of experience, is extremely childish and dumb. In the beginning the MC tells that he is too much prideful to cry but later decides to create a Mana Core( which he himself tells is extremely inefficient and weak) just to not rouse any kind of suspicion. Dude, where did all that pride go?! And really?! With a millennia worth of experience, he decides to create a weaker Mana Source just to not create any suspicion?! . . I will improve the rating if the Author changes the MC to be better.
[COMPLETED] TBATE | SHADOW MONARCH
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UselessAcc:Thanks, I'll try to improve everything. Also about mana-core, he created it so he will not seem suspicious in his family. He wants to live as human with his family in peace and right now he is HUMAN and can't manipulate his body like Sung did in LN. He needs Matured body or Container. He could still use mana as he did before coming there and even with core he could still use it as he wants, doesn't matter for him. . . And he is prideful if someone tries something bad to him, either way person is dead or is left without tongue.
Thanks, I'll try to improve everything. Also about mana-core, he created it so he will not seem suspicious in his family. He wants to live as human with his family in peace and right now he is HUMAN and can't manipulate his body like Sung did in LN. He needs Matured body or Container. He could still use mana as he did before coming there and even with core he could still use it as he wants, doesn't matter for him. . . And he is prideful if someone tries something bad to him, either way person is dead or is left without tongue.