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π”Έπ•žπ•’π•₯𝕖𝕦𝕣 π•Žπ•£π•šπ•₯π•–π•£πŸ“š β€œπš“πšžπšœπš πš’πš˜πšžπš› πšŽπšŸπšŽπš›πš’πšπšŠπš’ πšŠπšœπš’πšŠπš— πš•πš’πšŸπš’πš—πš πš’πš— 𝚊 πšπšŠπš—πšπšŠπšœπš’.” || Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/prommyhalibut

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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut2yr
    Replied to Findmysteryinme

    Yay! Thank you so much!

    "The eyes of wisdom, the truth unfolds, I summon the two animals, who completes the Zodiac's whole." Asteria waited as her prayer casted a bright light across the blanket of indigo and stars above, a summoning, no doubt, would have awakened the entire Heavens. She knew summoning a Zodiac this late would cause a short panic to spread across the Deities and Angels, for a Zodiac's summon was rarely done in the night unless it was an emergency. However, Asteria felt as though it was necessary that a Zodiac keep her company in that moment. For whatever reason that was, she was hoping the Pisces, the most intuitive of all the signs, might have an answer.
    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut2yr
    Replied to Findmysteryinme

    Thank you hehe

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    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut2yr
    Replied to Findmysteryinme

    Yay thank you so much for your review! You really just made my day hehe. I'm super happy you enjoyed it! Thank you so much again!!!

    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut2yr
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    Great start so far! I was really drawn by your writing style! I thought it was smooth and easy to read. The story is so mysterious, too, and I can't wait to see where it will go. Hopefully they'll be some cool twists hehe. But amazing work overall author! I hope you keep continuing this book in the future! I definitely recommend it to anyone wanting a great read at 3am hahaha >_<

    Deception: A trap in every step.
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut2yr
    Posted

    I have to say, you're synopsis did a great job reeling me into your story. It's concise enough to tell me what the novel is about without making it a hassle to read everything which is amazing! For the story itself, I'm enjoying it so much! I'm intrigued by Roxana's character, and I also enjoy how well you let the scenes flow after one another. The writing is smooth, easy to read, and nearly perfect. I cannot wait to see where this book goes >_<

    Lovingly together
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut2yr
    Replied to star_dreamer

    Ahh thank you so much for your review!!! I'm so happy you've enjoyed it! And yes, I'll keep in mind the spacing for the future. Thank you, thank you again for reading ^U^

    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut2yr
    Posted

    I really, really enjoyed this story so far! It's so mysterious and intriguing that I couldn't put it down. I love the way you set up your scenes because it creates a nice flow and progression, one that's not too fast or too slow. The characters are also well developed so far, and I love it! Also your writing is far better than most on this site. It was like I was reading a hardcover book! Awesome job author!!!

    Under Her Skin
    Teen Β· Cher_Yan
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut2yr
    Replied to Proteety_Promi

    Yay thank you so much for your review!!! I really appreciate it! As for the synopsis, I thought I made it long enough... maybe you didn't click the drop down button for the rest since there should be more than just the first few lines. But thank you again so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it ^U^

    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut2yr
    Posted

    I LOVE your ominous and mysterious writing style! Something about the narration just puts me on guard as a reader, trying to distinguish why the scenes are so mysterious, which really fits well with the tone of the story! In other words, your writing style really glued my eyes to the page! I would suggest shortening some sentences, because some tend to become a run on sentence or they just get wordy. Long, wordy sentences distracts the reader, so I suggest tweaking those a bit. The plot and characters have been amazing so far as well! I'm really hooked by it. Other than some issues with sentences and grammar, I really enjoyed the book so far, that's why I gave writing quality a 5/5! Again, amazing work author! Can't wait to see where this book goes ^U^

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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut3yr
    Replied to IcedMocha_21

    yayayay thank u so much!!!

    Ch 6 episode four : another Piscean vision
    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut3yr
    Replied to IcedMocha_21

    ooh tulips! i'm pretty allergic to those tho lol

    Ch 7 episode five : she who has never seen a rose
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut3yr
    Replied to Beng_Hobayan

    Yayay thank you so much!!! I'll try to review it and fix those grammatical errors. Thank you again for your feedback ^U^

    Ch 1 and so it begins
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut3yr
    Replied to Cher_Yan

    Aww thank you so much! I'm so, so, happy you've enjoyed it. I really appreciate your kind review and support! And yes, I'll check out yours when I have time! Thank you so much again!!!

    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut3yr
    Replied to Anit_14

    Yesss an Aquarius! Aquarius people are so chill ^U^

    Ch 2 prologue : the Pisces' vision
    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut3yr
    Replied to Anit_14

    hahaha thank u so much >_< I'm happy u enjoyed it!!!

    Ch 1 and so it begins
    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut3yr
    Replied to IcedMocha_21

    Yay! And yes, that sign will be very important later on O_O

    Ch 2 prologue : the Pisces' vision
    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut3yr
    Replied to Easy_Tiger

    yayaya Taurus!

    Ch 2 prologue : the Pisces' vision
    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut3yr
    Replied to Comfort_Wilson

    Oh yay!!! Thank you so much! I really appreciate it ^U^

    Ch 1 and so it begins
    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut3yr
    Replied to IcedMocha_21

    lol thank u so much >_<

    Ch 1 and so it begins
    She Who Reigns the Stars
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  • Prommy_Halibut
    Prommy_Halibut3yr
    Posted

    Ahh amazing!!! I don't usually read too much action stories such as this, but because of you, I'm going to start reading! And yours is going to be on the topic of my list hehe. It's awesome! You drew me in with your world building and action. I also loved how it's fast paced and exciting in every chapter and the writing is FLAWLESS. I recommend this to anyone wanting to read a fast-paced, full of action novel. Awesome job author!!!

    City of Vengeance
    Action Β· Easy_Tiger
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