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Minx_9998hReplied to ItzVatsal12ngl that genuinely creepy
"The rumors about you…" She stares into my eyes and stops. A second passes with her averting her eyes away from me as she continues; guess even the frozen heart cannot stop the allure of the Love Spot. "I didn't imagine you to be like this."- Minx_9992dReplied to NeverKnowCh 10 Nindō 0010: Noticing a Discrepancy
- Minx_9994dCommented
This don't flow right. No disrespect to the author. but overall, it a good chap.
Suddenly lust and desire filled Chena's eyes as the prospect of Kuzon being their house servant salivates her. - Minx_99919dCommented
Rick and morty
Feel free to list all your recommendations for me to write here. - Minx_99919dReplied to Riger82_So if I seal a target, I can change the inside of the pace such as by creating permanent lava lands or storm plains.
- Minx_99926dReplied to nicknamefrfrThe Flaxans screamed, their unintelligible language echoing across the battlefield as Mark hurried to deal with them.
- Minx_9991mthCommented
Your personal life is first and foremost and everything is second so continue what you are doing hope u can get everything right.
Maybe you've noticed that the quality of the chapter editing has dropped a lot, well, I wish I had a great excuse for that, and I do: Basically I got dumped from my house and my life is a mess, so I'm not able to edit the chapters well. - Minx_9991mthReplied to DaoistvZHdIQThe wine flask
- Minx_9991mthCommentedCh 9 Imperial Academy
- Minx_9991mthCommented"Nah id win" a voice was heard over the radio. It was a random survivor.
- Minx_9991mthPosted
Ok let go over what I think need to be changed or updated do something else when I read it jack did this jack did that, I won't say it irritating but I would like a different perspective it a fun read though just the Pov fells weird. OK now that out of the way there to many A/N that messes up the flow of the story I'm thinking it apart of the story when it not it can get irritating sometimes. writing quality is good but like I said the Pov, and A/N can sometime irritate you. I like how the character is portrayed. he also using his army knowledge quite nicely which I find refreshing because when the usually have military knowledge the author don't know how to use it. Overall, the story is good when I find some other thing u can fix I will make a new review.
- Minx_9991mthReplied to Kw0z
what
Her voice was the only thing that helped me calm down a little. - Minx_9991mthReplied to SaishoMysteriarch
being truthful bout oneself makes u dumb??
He isn't going to lie to himself, he's quite lustful, and he obviously would like to get one of those beauties. - Minx_9992mthPosted
It's one of the best novels I've read, and even though it has 25 chapters, the grammar is excellent and flawless. The world building isn't as developed as it could be—we only see him in a forest and close to a school—but the story flows well and I like that there is a limit to his strength—if he could get stronger quickly, the plot would become very predictable. The pace is also nice—it's neither too fast nor too slow to take a long time to complete tasks. All things considered, it's a good read.
- Minx_9992mthCommentedThis book has been deleted.
- Minx_9992mthReplied to Riekoo
yes
Once again, Wonderwoman cut Superman off, bringing her blade even closer to his neck. "If you dare lay false accusations on my friend once more, I will not hesitate to fight you, even to the death. For we Amazons protect our honor with our lives, and I consider my friends honor my own, so watch your words." - Minx_9992mthCommented*tap* At this time, another woman entered the room "Ying'er, how many times have I told you not to disturb Tian'er?" she asked in a soft tone looking at Zhao Ying riding on top of Zhao Tian while he was exercising.