Review Detail of Minx_999 in dying light. (full redo)

Ok let go over what I think need to be changed or updated do something else when I read it jack did this jack did that, I won't say it irritating but I would like a different perspective it a fun read though just the Pov fells weird. OK now that out of the way there to many A/N that messes up the flow of the story I'm thinking it apart of the story when it not it can get irritating sometimes. writing quality is good but like I said the Pov, and A/N can sometime irritate you. I like how the character is portrayed. he also using his army knowledge quite nicely which I find refreshing because when the usually have military knowledge the author don't know how to use it. Overall, the story is good when I find some other thing u can fix I will make a new review.