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Yoshimitsu293

Yoshimitsu293

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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2938mth
    Replied to 476667
    Ch 673 Blood Text
    Lord of Mysteries
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    30h to 1h is the exact same as 30d to 1d

    After a long time and a great deal of consideration, she opened her mouth and said with some hesitation in her tone of voice, "Do you think the time difference in this place is 30 hours equaling 1 of our world... or is it 30 days equaling 1 day...?"
    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    he won't what?

    Before he could hit Kayden, a wave of telekinetic power struck the demon king, sending his body to the sky. "A Hecatoncheires, I won't if Master will find you interesting," Cain said, floating beside the demon king.
    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    *This is the shrine...*

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    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    *invoking

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    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    *them instead of there

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    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    *duel instead of dual

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    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    *got a ton of contracts* or *got tons of contracts*

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    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    phrasing

    "For starters, you weren't counting on me to protect any of our bases right? Then I don't see anything wrong with you taking me."
    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    passing away means to die. you probably intended to use passing out which means to lose consciousness (fall asleep)

    Ishtar's guard pissed herself and passed away, twitching as she appeared beside her. The woman's scent alone was enough to intoxicate their brains. CLICK! CLACK! She walked slowly toward the unconscious guard.
    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    so after the Expansion of Earth due to it's Evolution old Maps are still accurate?

    Given her past, Evangeline naturally had knowledge of a lot of sensitive information. With her, taking down any Russian resistance would be far easier in the near future.
    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    "sent" instead of "did send" "told" instead of "did tell" "other pixies they met" or "other pixies if they met any"

    "I did send a group of scouts to gather resources outside and I did tell them to try and recruit other pixies if they met. One of the methods of recruiting was giving them mana, to show what kind of food they can expect to find." Mei looked hesitated.
    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    "dept." is short for Department. The word you were looking for is "debt".

    "I'm especially in dept. to Alice for helping me get closer to you, I would kiss her feet had she asked me for that. But Mary, I would only say it one time. Trusting you is hard, especially since you can change everything without us knowing." Marina approached and kissed Cain's forehead.
    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    How come the Satellites are still in Orbit and haven't been pulled to Earth yet by it's increased gravitational pull?

    Ch 779 Powerhouses & New World!
    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Replied to Charles_Terry

    Considering that Salaark offered Lith a better deal than Thrud could and he still rejected i think its safe to assume he wouldve rejected her aswell

    "An idiot like you, instead, isn't even capable of cleaning a chamber pot without getting dirty." Thrud actually considered both Lith and Manohar two massive thorns in her side.
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Replied to Reganin

    probably meant to say "She was a Druid one could reason with"

    However, Iris couldn't reveal her class. The five noble families would be nothing compared to the people seeking to steal Iris for themselves. Not only was Iris of a rare goblin variant and a new race, but she was a Druid who lived a human lifestyle. She was a Druid reason with.
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Replied to johnnysleepsalot

    didnt they meet her(Salaark) and Leegaain there aswell? Since its a hotel most of the rooms are probably similar if not identical

    From the outside, it looked like a two-story cottage, while on the inside it was identical to the room Lith and Kamila had shared in the Flying Griffon hotel.
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    lightning bolt *struck...

    The ship groaned like a pig trying to release his last meal, its wood cracked under the massive stress as the sailor's luck run out. CRACKLE! A lightning bolt stroke right in the middle of the ship killing a third of them and knocking the rest deafened.
    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    what *happened

    "The operation didn't go as smoothly as expected. What did happen?" Alice asked with a worried face.
    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • Yoshimitsu293
    Yoshimitsu2931yr
    Commented

    is it Elsie or Elise, because it keeps swapping every other Sentence?

    "Lady Alice…You have been listening to us all this time?" Elise looked at her in surprise.
    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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