I feel like it was a bad move to give the sword to the kid, he isn't there to help people, he is there to get strong enough to bring his sister back. I know he felt sorry for him but come on man, this is going to come to bite him in the a** and we know it.

After seeing the person that she cares about fighting for her and everyone else and almost getting killed because of it will make feels A LOT more pronounced and make you realize that like she said "Life is to short" that is completely true even IRL. Life is to short to not take the chances that are given.

Now if he clones All for One and gives it to himself would that remove the negative effect of having more then one quirk?

Of course the 'Savior' couldn't follow simple instructions and just touch his face, why would he? It would have made for less drama and it wouldn't force the MC to show off in front of Voldy.

The only tag on the novel is Non-Harem

I live in the real world every day. It doesn't matter if she was controlled or not, she was not innocent, she did what she did and it got almost got her friend killed. If she was really innocent then why was she so upset about it? Why was she blaming herself? She knew that deep down it was her fault even if she was controlled. With the way that she was acting it wouldn't have surprised me if she offed herself anyway.

It is starting to get annoying for sure.

The worst torture for Dumbledore is knowing that he was so close to getting what he was trying to achieve and then having everything taken away from him, the final nail in the coffin is that last string of reason knowing what is going on and what could have happened but being forced to sit there and watch as he rots away.

We both know that he will do that in all good time, Difference of opinion on how we would react honestly, I wouldn't care if they knew or not or if they where controlled or not, love is blind and anger can make people do petty things.

What would you do, if the person you loved was tortured and almost killed? Would it matter to you that the person who lead your loved one into an ambushed was controlled to do so? Would it matter to you that they felt bad after? I know if it was me I personally wouldn't care at all, I would get my revenge no matter what. Nothing would stop me just like how the MC took care of Cho.

The reason why most fan fictions make Dumbledore a bad or evil person is because even in the original books he really wasn't a good person, he was manipulative and kept things to himself that caused many people to die, and used his power to outlaw certain magic that he didn't like. he never really was a good person, he was a 'For the Greater Good' kind of guy just like his lover was.

The spider hasn't even been brought to Hogwarts yet, remember Hagrid is only a 1st year and he didn't bring in the spider until his 3rd year.

I'm guessing that he wasn't because he is now a friend of the goblins and is under their protection and when he is at his homes I'm sure that he is safe under the wards.

It seems like he is forgetting the fact that he can just you know shoot lightning at something? He did it the firs time he awakened his quirk but not once after that. He is all about fighting up close and I have a feeling its because of the haki but come on man. He can shoot million volt lightning volts around anytime he wants. Think about how the fruit was used in One Piece.

I love the faces in the chapter, it makes it so much better for me. I see everything in my head anyway but they make me laugh because they work so well with what is going on.

Yeah I gathered that much lol, I'm really enjoying your novel. Keep up the great work.

Since when are their three houses taking classes together, Hermione is in Ravenclaw not Gryffindor so how could she be with them during the flying lesson?

I feel like the passive stat growth is stunted, if she is doing these 'training' all the time, then she should have gained more stats then she did already. With the 'Gamer' system then when you do anything repetitively then you gain a skill for it or stats for it, you can keep pushing the difficulty and keep up the grind that way.

No estoy seguro de por qué él no hace algo así tampoco, sinceramente. Supongo que si lo hiciera, quitaría un posible punto de drama de la historia.

I thought of this as well when I heard the names of the people teaching him martial arts.