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tedmosby20166dCommentedI think this is it for me. Thanks for the chapters.
'I should have been more careful.' Internally, Kazuki berated himself.- tedmosby201618dCommented
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The Game of a Blood Mage - tedmosby20161mthCommentedIt was a young-looking girl, around the same age as me. I was completely caught by surprise, I quickly pushed her off of me and looked around to see what was going on.
- tedmosby20161mthReplied to Zed_5601
Please share your top 5 reading list. We are dying over here from lack of good recommendations
As I lay down on my deathbed, surrounded by my family I look back at all I have experienced through my 115 years of life. - tedmosby20161mthReplied to Emmanuel_Onyechesi
I will delete my review. I just wanted to give a reason why I was dropping it. felt wrong to just leave. There were so many plot holes but I was so resolved to not critique everything as it happened chapter by chapter. apparently I am a troll when I do it. but off the top of my head: I won't lie, I came for the MC but it is like this novel wasn't even about him. he just didn't care about anything. he was in his own little world.then he goes into hibernation for absolutely no reason besides the story needs him to.. even though he was just born and he has every incentive to stay awake and capitalize. Bottom line is if the MC doesn't even care about his story it makes it hard for us to care. And now we have to read about his dumb, pushover naive son.. please give the gods the reverence they deserve. having a god that sound or behaves like a middle schooler is kinda disappointing.. it was embarrassing the way he behaved around a monkey and a female god that was just born and is way younger than him. way too much happens "off screen" basically it is you telling us something happened.. As for the women.. only TV women are like that (sitcoms, movies) or hateful controlling feminists, or around simpy insecure men. maybe you were looking for toxic abnoxious female characters. Healthy relationships are not like that. and don't forget we are talking about a god and a demigod here dealing with a buncha monkeys.. are you kidding me. A sun god fried his own daughter in his own domain, and it was an accident.. do you realize how ridiculous this sounds. A god, in his own domain.. Lol. he wrote a tiny carry on book about how to build and run a kingdom.. plus an enclopedia of the daily how to "start a fire" all in one tiny book.. I hope you realize how silly this sounds. The ape tribe is just too rushed and feels off. doesn't seem real nor believable. now they are a family and there is aunties.. everything feels contrived. oh yeah not forgetting a female ape decided to talk down on a god.. "what was he doing.. " are you kidding me. it is so weird. she is talking about a god not her brother. there is a pattern to your female characters, they are all the same character. It's like you think they have to put down a man or a male god to show toughness. Anyway.. I will be here all day if I continued on and on. thanks for the read though.
- tedmosby20161mthReplied to Void_Erbus
There is a pattern to trashy authors. the way they structure and narrate their stories. After reading hundreds of terrible novels it is very easy to tell. and they don't get better over time, they get worse. It is easier to drop them early.
Time returned to the present. - tedmosby20161mthCommented
Yup. I am out. Man, western authors love identity crisis. sharing souls. blaming the other for their actions or feelings
So, secretly, I learned to cope without trying to raise any suspicion. The man who seemed to be a doctor of sorts, though that's a rather generous term, simply chalked it up to boyhood changes and the birth of my newest younger sister. Nobody really seemed to look past that, thankfully, as otherwise they'd probably think I was a changeling or something that had replaced the 'real' Casper. Come to think of it, he's still here, but not a separate entity anymore, otherwise I'd have not known anyone's names, or the layout of the small castle I now called home, or even how to speak this odd language. Maybe my 'transplantation' caused us to merge into a new being? Hard to say, and it's something I try not to think about. - tedmosby20161mthCommented
another two bit villain..
"Hm, the first phase has unfolded according to plan. I now possess a foundational level of trust and support to amplify my operations," Bondrewd mused aloud, his darker thoughts shrouded from all but himself. - tedmosby20161mthCommented
These numbers are like Zimbabwean dollars. I don't know if it's 100 million or billion for a loaf of bread or it is still not enough
However, Tsunade seems different. In the combined time of the incident a few days ago and today's, it wouldn't exceed two hours. Yet Tatsuma has picked up over 200 points of talent upper limit from her, which is almost equivalent to Tatsuma's entire harvest over four or five days in the past. - tedmosby20161mthReplied to Random_exeHe is not a battle craze but to measure his true ability he taunted and provoked Rasa to fight him with all he had and that seemed to have worked even better than he expected.
- tedmosby20161mthReplied to Random_exe
do you have a reading list I can feast my greedy eyes on?
He is not a battle craze but to measure his true ability he taunted and provoked Rasa to fight him with all he had and that seemed to have worked even better than he expected. - tedmosby20161mthReplied to Random_exe
continue listening, if that sound turns racist do let me know.
He is not a battle craze but to measure his true ability he taunted and provoked Rasa to fight him with all he had and that seemed to have worked even better than he expected. - tedmosby20161mthCommented
wow, such a tiny place. a single school in the entire country.
What Nick wasn't expecting however was that he was in a class with the Harry Potter and his cousin Dudley Dursley. Nick stood out like a sore thumb when he was introduced to the class thanks to the huge scab and yellow and brown bruises on his head alongside the short grey locks of hair that had managed to grow back in the past week at the orphanage. Nick could tell that when he treated Harry in a friendly manner during the class that it made the boys whole day as he cheered up considerably. 'Sometimes just being accepted is enough' Nick thought to himself with a small genuine small when he said good bye to Harry for the day. - tedmosby20161mthReplied to Ivan_TheEnigma
sigh.. it's an idea you moron. rooted in history. an idea that shutting up is overrated. It is a luxury for the rich and comfortable. and a sad pathetic escuse for morons like yourself who can't even fight for what they believe in.
Nick didn't want to lie and have to explain it later, he also thought that Aizawa might report this to Nezu or Recovery Girl too, which would be beneficial for him. Nodding his head he walked over and said to Midoriya. "Can I have your hand?" His voice was polite as he held out his expectantly. - tedmosby20161mthReplied to Organ_Martin
for the same reason people still get divorced after 5, 10, 20, 50 years of marriage.. hint: go ask your mom
Fujin thought, 'Yeah, it would have been great if I wanted to fight for the Hokage spot. I'm sure I could raise most of these kids to be Jounins and have their unwavering support. But I don't have much interest in it. So this will just be a chore… Still, this is a good opportunity.' - tedmosby20161mthCommented
I won't lie. I enjoyed this chapter very much.. after some thinking I realized why, There were zero mentions of Minato. Thank you for the chapter.
After speaking, she looked at Tatsuma and said, "Jiraiya and Grandma might not chat for long. We should definitely take advantage of this time to play cards!" - tedmosby20161mthReplied to Ivan_TheEnigma
Politicians love people like you. you would do very well in China or north korea. On the other hand, civil rights, human rights, ability to vote all these were fought for by people who had nothing nice to say about the status quo. I bet Israel would love your thinking as well. watching silently as they murder children and civilians. Just in case you are curious south Africa had absolutely nothing nice to say about israel and took it to the international criminal court and won. Now go get me some tea young padawan
Nick didn't want to lie and have to explain it later, he also thought that Aizawa might report this to Nezu or Recovery Girl too, which would be beneficial for him. Nodding his head he walked over and said to Midoriya. "Can I have your hand?" His voice was polite as he held out his expectantly.