A good beer, a good book makes a good night. To make it better just add a good woman
you are just as bad as DBZ ! stopping the fight just to tell everyone and there mother's thought about what just happened.
ignoring idiots is the best way to deal with them. when they screwed up you look better and they look stupid
love the way the story is going so far. Please keep in mind that name changes will be hard to maintain in the future. most writers don't keep it up
You should use Willy's name instead. Especially if you want that character to be know as Willy to the other characters in your story
A MC that is not a fool but a good guy and knows the price of doing bad. I just wish that I could know what his ex is going to do
that is better than most summaries that I have read. thanks!