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Ravven2769

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  • Ravven2769
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    Commented

    Why would you befriend him? He's fat, lazy and pathetic in every measure. He'd actually become a liability if you were trying to befriend someone else because they'd be creeped out by him.

    Ch 28 [28] Reuniting with Senpai
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    Life As Hikigaya Hachiman
    Anime & Comics · Leonzky
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  • Ravven2769
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    Commented

    Yeah, I understand that he was meant to represent the edgy teenager but as Dante, or a team leader in general, the boy is practically useless as a teammate. Wally is annoying and often detrimental but he's fairly smart and has useful abilities. Superboy is a prat

    "Not exactly. His anger makes him unpredictable and that unpredictability is a liability in this mission." Dante explained.
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    Young Justice: Ghost
    Anime & Comics · Arokey
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27699d
    Posted

    Frankly this is one of the best young justice ffics out there that I've read. With good characterisation and action, I loved it. That being said, the author has also dropped it

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    Young Justice: Ghost
    Anime & Comics · Arokey
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  • Ravven2769
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    Posted

    The story is quite obviously translated and the personalities of the characters have been replaced with stereotypes so obvious I felt I was reading a wuxia. Miraculously mastering combat in 6 months, seducing women with absolutely no effort and CONVINCING A TRAINED ASSASSIN THAT KILLING IS WRONG AFTER 2 SENTENCES. This should never have been created

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    DC: The Queen Anomaly
    Anime & Comics · Hopeless_Reader
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven276913d
    Replied to Kratos_theLycaon

    I would assume some hand stuff but nothing further. Felicity is approx 19 currently and thea 15

    Creating a base was truly challenging. Batman managed with a cave, but they had to do all this messy work. After a lot of effort, the environment did improve significantly; at least it was now bearable. Thea had essentially turned Felicity into a jack-of-all-trades, employing her as a laborer, mover, and decorator for two days straight. Reluctant to refuse Felicity's suggestion to soak in a hot spring, Thea accompanied her with fearless spirit, though the details of what happened below the neck will not be described here. Suffice it to say, the entire process could be summed up in the words of the venerable martial arts master, Xuzhu: "Very good, excellent, indescribably enjoyable."
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    DC: The Queen Anomaly
    Anime & Comics · Hopeless_Reader
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27695mth
    Replied to flys36

    eww

    Ch 11 Romantic interest! (Not a Chapter)
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    Young Dracula: Chosen
    TV · MischevousScamp
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27695mth
    Commented

    Yeah, Naruto would have wasn’ it anyway and they should have earnt special Jonin

    "Simple, you two get a battlefield promotion from Genin to chunin."
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    Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
    Anime & Comics · some_writer
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27695mth
    Replied to jess_weston

    Not to mention that in three years, he taught him literally one jutsu. Not fuinjutsu, not taijutsu, nothing. In the OC

    " You don't need to worry about that, sensei. I'll perform my duty as his godfather and train him to be the strongest ninja in the world. I have many great failures in my life, Naruto would not and will never be one of them. "
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    Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27696mth
    Replied to GRV

    I imagine the transfer does give a sudden boost, but the process and development of power would be gradual

    Sasuke now bore both Indra's and Asura's chakras, a fusion that propelled his might. With 50-60% of Otsutsuki ancestry woven into his very DNA, he found himself growing more potent with each passing day, a metamorphosis that occurred without conscious effort.
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    Naruto : Pure Blood
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27696mth
    Replied to GRV

    he can, but increasing from 10 to 20 is easier than 80 to 90, so maybe he plans to save the points and improve the later levels?

    But Naruto was sure with six eyes he will be able to master all the elements to the highest degree that no one had mastered until now, he was sure that it will take years to master all the elements above 90% but he will master them, that was sure.
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    Naruto : Pure Blood
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27696mth
    Replied to Nasu

    Yeah, but they only help him percieve and visualise it I think. More like an aide than actually giving him perfect control. A blind archer will struggle more than one with sight, but both need to learn how to aim and fire

    I possess chakra much greater than a normal shinobi of my age," Naruto thought. "So, for these 6 months, I'll focus on improving my chakra control."
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    Naruto : Pure Blood
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27696mth
    Commented

    literally spat out some drink reading this

    " So you wearing a cat suit doesn't make you a transvestite then?!" Naruto shouted back. A transvestite is a person who dresses in clothes primarily associated with the other sex(typically used of a man). Basically Naruto called him a cosplayer and a sissy at the same time.
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    Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27696mth
    Replied to ImperialFayMonarch

    It's annoying how good that looks

    Naruto walked into the kitchen as he finished dressing in his Shinobi attire and tying on his head band.
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    Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27696mth
    Commented

    CAP Otherwise hiruzen would never have been given the position

    " Now that you're a Genin, you need to actually take the time to learn about being a shinobi. After all, a Hokage is not just the most powerful ninja in the village, he is the smartest and most cunning as well." Hiruzen explained. Naruto scratched his head.
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    Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27696mth
    Replied to Mathew_Thompson

    Paint a face on a rock and we'd like it better than OG Sakura

    " I.... I didn't know.... I'm so sorry...." Sakura whispered. If she wasn't ashamed of her actions before, she was now. Iruka shook his head.
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    Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27696mth
    Commented

    Considering that everything she learned in the academy was useless, Naruto needs to kick her in the chin

    "Because he's loud, unorthodox, inattentive and incredibly stupid! How can I teach him if he won't even understand and pay attention to my lessons?! " Sakura shouted. Naruto frowned and clutched his heart, feeling a little hurt at Sakura's hurtful words.
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    Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27696mth
    Replied to Soryuken

    That....actually isnt a terrible theory

    But he wasn't one to judge. He just kept staring at Sakura, there was something about her that made Naruto attracted to her.
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    Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27696mth
    Replied to Dark_PersonJJ

    Theoretically, but it's also immensly easy, since almost every ninja can do it, including npcs. So it's probably C rank in chakra expenditure, rather than difficulty

    "The Body Flicker Technique, a high-speed movement technique." Naruto whispered as he is sitting on a big rock and reading the scroll Hiruzen gave him.
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    Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27696mth
    Commented

    What?? That is one of the dumbest things I've ever heard. Blunt things dont cut, which means they can't slash

    Regaining their senses, one of the women who seemed to be the oldest of the group, stepped forward with a long steel bar in her hands, the steel bar was slightly curved, making it suitable for slashing even when the steel was blunt.
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    IN THE APOCALYPSE WITH ZOMBIE POWERS
    Horror · Vee_High
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  • Ravven2769
    Ravven27696mth
    Commented

    And Aomine never beat Tsuna...so

    "Back during our days at Teiko, Kise never managed to win a single one-on-one against Aomine," Kuroko revealed.
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    Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)
    Anime & Comics · mythoast
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