i still dont understand how he was born cause aint no way his dad fit

will you do edgerunners plz do?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

name one story where its not the first chapter

why dosent he try to start a basketball team

this is bad the start was bad but then you put the prologue in chapter 3 then you wrote a fight scene out of nowhere just rewrite the story or drop the story it disrespectful to the flash and dc

how

make bro a bit more selfish on the court

1

still feels like a side character its like you're nerfing him bad

bro you got to remember most people in dbz are week your think about the z fighter outside of like them there is like 8 tops that are strong

not really

why he never acknowledge the real author said he can post

this is good keep going

drop the next chapter

cop out

but you not showing him makes it fell like he a extra in the story

bro you got to tell us what he be doing during the game more often

bro look like he slap a kids ice cream

where

where