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While I was reading, I realized that I was absorbed by the novel. This is a very important detail for me. The fiction of the characters and the narration of the world further increased my desire to read the book. I like your book and I am adding it to my collection. I wish you continued success
The plot and progress of the book is really good. These are things we all know. I want to mention the missing places for the author to improve himself. First of all, I had a hard time understanding some places where the writing language could be improved a bit. You can examine the events in a little more detail in the book. If you can correct these deficiencies in time, your book will definitely be ranked one day.
While I was reading the novel, I was constantly wondering what would happen in the next chapter. The language of expression definitely deserves appreciation. I cannot comment on language knowledge because my English is not perfect. The best part of the novel is that you bring a different perspective to mythology. It is definitely worth reading. I just broke points from update stability.