Review Detail of LordSputnik in 汉语12

The Good: Very interesting premise, while not entirely new, it does add enough elements to make it fairly unique in a cultivation saturated environment. The characters are fairly likeable even if the amount of them is lacking. The Bad: I probably don't need to say how much the grammar and the mistranslations need to be fixed. It takes away from the story, but I did notice you improved from the first to last chapter so that is great! The characters are likeable, but they are pure character tropes. For your first novel, this isn't a bad thing. Tropes became tropes because they work. The Neutral: As your English improves, so will your writing in English. I understand that it's hard to write in a non-native language so I never take that into consideration. Regardless, you are improving with each chapter. It might help to find someone else that can read English to help you catch some of the mistranslations. Still, keep at it and occasionally you will find spots where I offered corrections.