Oh finally back? Hope you don't disappear after this update.

The moment you decided to judge a novel based on, if it's free or not, already shows your conditions and iq you possess.

Lol, The best answer you can come with?

Lol coming from the most stupid person on platform. Do you even know why review exist? It's definitely not so you can give 5 star cause fanfics have free chapters. Lol and how you changed it cause now it's not free, not even giving a reason.

Bruh... First you make a stupid review then make an other stupid review. Then ask who hurts you? Are for real?

And what would you read about Klein? He is already Above the Sequence. And no matter how strong Klein is, he is not stopping all Outer God's alone.

I have no words.... Your whole comment doesn't make a single sense. Author has explain about everything in end of First volume bruh.. I am really surprised someone of your iq exist.

Do you know what his other review was? If not then don't talk.

I was thinking, what only developers can make game? More Mana? So in later stage don't players have enough Mana? What defines a level? Author just show that "I have more points with gun so i am E rank now".Wtf is this?. In all honestly Author just want to make his MC Over Powered. He didn't even put a good restrictions in developers.

Absolutely right, you can say for sure that Author only made Basic Framework of the story, and didn't thought much about in depth problem.

Using other people work in your story and Charging people to read it, is illegal. Most of time company doesn't care as most fanfic only work as advertisement for them, and going for lawsuit may consume more money. So they ignore people using patron and other but this is Web novel a famous website, and here asking money to read fanfic? Maybe Author didn't know it might cost him more than he might make.

Okay, I don't think that is a good enough reason to give it a 1 Star.

Writing Quality :- 4 Star Updating Stability :- 4 Star (One less cause it's look like author forgot he was writing one more series before this one) Story Development :- 2 Star (I'm finding many things to be "Illogical" In this story. It's human nature to find fun in boring stuff, so to saying that no one come up with an idea too male games more fun doesn't sit well with me. There is also not much info about MC system or how MC has sach a good memory that he remember every sentence said by NPC. Other things would be what is actual difference between a Developer and a Player, is this only about having more mana? Aren't developers just too overpowered in your story? What is Ratio of Developer and Player? So many things are unanswered, and and fills like Author started writing story about only making basic framework instead of in depth thinking) Character Design :- 2 Star ( Characters fills not real and more 2D to me, they are like people programmed to only say good things and prise everything about Main Character) World Background :- 2 Star (Can't say much about it cause MC has yet to travel different city's but it is still 2 star for me) Overall :- Good novel for passing free time, will reading this novel you have to accept many things cause author say so. But i honestly don't see myself getting into this novel.

Well just a question, is he even allowed to catch so many pokemon? Ash has backing of Oak, a regional professor. But Or MC don't have that, is Nurse Joy really willing to look after all his pokemon?

Probably an Angel, cause she would be dead otherwise.

Bruh remembee Marvel? The guy is doing it again.

How many Mega strones Alex got for his Pokemon?

When will he achieve first Mega evolution? Can someone spoil me?

Author... Why the f MC still thinks he is below average in look didn't he saw his own reflection on Mirror? Or does he think every one around him are more handsome than thim?

What a good Doujinsh plot, I should write that down.