It's a pretty good read, though there are quite a few questionable choices. MC underestimates the darkness of humanity and it's ability to emulate and innovate. The thing about developers being skill merchants, mana steriod users, and able to get better abilities compared to players of the same rank is quite questionable, and making me pondering if the MC is on a trajectory for peak wishfufilment. Then the tid-bit about S-rank developers not participating in wars often, I'd reccomend adding on to it that they don't get involved unless the mana donator population goes below accepted levels. With how emotions can increase skill selling, why hasn't the natorious 'Bad guy group' made a game with eldritch creatures that drive mortal men insane bacause 'Who cares about mental health? I want my child soldier now!' Or is it a prototype? The novel is good in the first fourty chapters, though beware of the dreaded privelaged chapters soldier!
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