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A lot of things are too exaggerated. First Carman's hatred toward the Fatuis, calling them evil and stuff. In the game Childe released a dangerous god but was partly manipulated by La Signora and Zhongli. La Signora Stole Venti's gnosis but didn't much more in Mondstat, in Inazuma she handled quite a few things with Scaramouche like schemes against the shogun and the country, but failed and did not amount to much. Wanderer turned dark because of the three 'betrayals'. Fatuis agents are for the most part just random soldiers doing their job. I believe of all the fatuis known only Dottore was evil with maybe the Rooster.
Quite a few grammatical mistakes author... I recommend you watch out those at least twice before posting new chapters, for example I saw 'I am turned my head' or something like that. There are quite of bit of 'I' written as 'i' as well. Some characters' phrasings don't feel natural either, especially Lumine.
'You moron!'
"Day
'Now that I'
'All journeys'
'its own people'
'A life will eventually reach the end of its lifespan'
Haven't started actually reading but I think you got confused between Visions and Gnosis... Gnosis are basically archons' visions, what makes at their position a higher form of Vision, Visions are round small objects that give people certain powers, they are granted by archons or Celestia.