ObsidianBLK
I'm an Editor and an avid reader. Working on a few stories of my own but haven't published anything.
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ObsidianBLK3dCommentedthe last six paragraphs could have been two sentences.
"Okay. You talked, that's great. Communication is key, after all. I'm sure mom will forgive whatever you managed to mess up dad." I teased him right back, which made my mother laugh and my father grumble.- ObsidianBLK3dCommented
This MC has a major issue going off on tangents that expound on whatever he is thinking about that end up breaking the immersion with all of his over explaining. I get that the story is slow paced. but this is taking it way too far. I hope all this info dump stuff stops happening once he gets older. because I am getting tired of chapters being 10+ pages of exposition that adds nothing to progressing the plot.
Towns had 16 PokeCenters, and Villages had 1-4 PokeCenters. Damn, I started to digress from my main focus again. Back to the reason I came here in the first place, the Stadium. - ObsidianBLK4dCommented
give that Magnaton an electric stone. go even further beyond.
A Nidorino (his starter), a Butterfree, a Pidgeot, a Crobat, a Seadra, a Magneton, a Rhydon and a Growlithe. - ObsidianBLK5dCommented
... man, the Chinese have some sayings that don't translate well.
Then he was forced to put down his pride as a genius and pinch her legs beat her back and wash her feet with a humiliating look on his face!detailPokemon: Reborn as ash , Make up for your regrets and become strongerAnime & Comics · stromerthaha - ObsidianBLK7dCommented
please don't let there be more ntr in this. at least here's hoping there isn't any more.
As I was balls deep in her the plane suddenly pitched into a complete nosedive, tossing us around the small cabin like a bunch of rag dolls until we came to a sudden abrupt halt, and a bright and burning light filled the cabin. That was why I didn't question the very real possibility that I was dead, and only really felt sorry for the stewardess' husband about how her body was going to be discovered. - ObsidianBLK9dCommentedSo, their stall sales had not been very good yesterday. So, Axel came up with one of the most famous Nepalese snacks called Momo.
- ObsidianBLK12dReplied to quinnno
Can't be. It works too hard to be a Nara.
A week had passed and Shedinja was able to learn its new move. Axel called it 'Shadow control'. With this Shedinja could bind the enemies with its shadow. - ObsidianBLK12dCommented
well, he has 3 for Evee, 1 for nidoran, one for slow bro, one for Goldbat, I think he has it covered. lolz
"Done. But the rewards from Lance family would be revoked. They would be contributing 1 of those resource. You also would have to make a huge discovery like Eeveelutions.", said Agatha. - ObsidianBLK13dCommented
English is weird. the plural fof Moose, is Moose, same with the plural of deer being deer.
Lastly, I know that the plural of Pokemon are also called 'Pokemon' but I use 'Pokemons' because It never really fit with me before. How can singular and Plural be the same. it is like 'why is building called building when it is already built?' - ObsidianBLK16dCommented
Make Ichor Great!!!
Building a wall, and making Kaedwen pay for it. - ObsidianBLK19dCommented
it's not like he is an Uchiha.
Last but not least he attempts Conquerors Haki... He'd tried to master it in Kaer Morhen but he didn't even manage to use it, he'd assumed it was for the same reason his Armament Haki was bad, he had a weak soul... His guess seems to have been incorrect as he is still incapable of even mustering the smallest use of it. Perhaps he needs a catalyst of some sort? He remembers that Luffy manifested it while trying to save his brother Ace. Such a story device is annoying Reima, where on earth is he going to find something like that? He's definitely not going to put his loved ones in danger just to achieve a power. - ObsidianBLK19dCommented
it's dark souls, you must collect everything.
The merchant seems surprised but presents his wares to him anyway, most of what he sells are Green blossoms that rapidly regenerate stamina and black fire bombs... He also has a small collection of titanite of various sizes and colours, Reima buys all of them before glacing over the rings containing a yellow and blue gem. The Thunder StonePlate ring and the Spell StonePlate ring, Reima is running out of fingers to equip rings but buys them anyway, never know when they could come in handy... Definitely not hoarding them. The two rings provide resistances against thunder and Sorcery respectively. - ObsidianBLK20dCommented
quip!
"I don't know how to read lips. I'm going to need some more practice to be able to understand," Peter teased back. - ObsidianBLK20dCommentedCh 148 Ethan's Animagus
- ObsidianBLK22dCommented"I will pound you to death."
- ObsidianBLK23dCommented
but... cool guys don't look at explosions
"Explosions are cool." - ObsidianBLK23dCommented
it's a Senju thing.
Tsunade sits in a corner of the room and draws circles on the floor with her finger. - ObsidianBLK24dCommented
something tells me that has bit this dude before.
"NO!!" God shakes his head. - ObsidianBLK25dCommented
I don't find Lemons to be needed for good stories, commenting that something is happening is enough, let's you know the status of the relationship without the needless smut. there are other stories for that.
(The Bed Scene has been skipped)